Some parts I found really hard to understand but to be honest this really a very good story!

I've never read anything like this before. It was different and unique and I loved every minute of it. You are a great writer and you had such a unique spin on the whole story. FAVORITED.

That... was absolutely amazing. Had me hooked from the first word to the last. Wow. Just, wow.

There are no words. Only .

Well written. Kudos.

That was AMZING! best story ever plz make a squil

Holy crap holy crap holy crap. I thought I'd already wolfed down each and every Yuri/Flynn fic I could find in , and yet I MISSED THE BEST ONE? I can't believe I did!

This is made of pure genius. Writing a complete AU under 7000 words when you completely made up a whole new world, roles and setting in itself is already a huge feat to manage, and I have to say I'm completely stunned by your ability to write it so well! I went all "Crap, what was that I just read?" in stupor once I'm done reading-in a great sense. I can absolutely picture this verse in my head (and part of me actually really wants to see a continuation of this, or a prequel of how Askarin died xDDD but that's my greedy side talking though if you ever decided to write another story in this verse, I'd gladly read it over and over and over and give you a long standing applause).

I love the way you connected their elements with their appearance-I tried to interpret it by how you described their physical appearance and, mostly, wings. I think it's a great way to capture your readers' attention to the smallest detail in your work. If I'm not wrong, Yuri's element is Shadow and Flynn's Light, right? xDD And I absolutely, absolutely love how you kept everyone in character-especially Yuri. He's just-so perfect I can't even begin to describe. Your Flynn is utterly solid-from how proper he is, how he dedicates his whole being into what he's doing, to how he can never ignore Yuri whatever happens. Devil!Yuri is amazingly charming and captivating, and the idea of him taking a physical appearance of a woman made me giggle. Your Rita-I just love her to bits; her snarky comments and just-Rita. The element fire really suits her the best xD And Raven and Patty! It's logical that their appearances should ease Flynn's intense nights and it's a nice breather part of the fic, without completely erasing the dark atmosphere.

The plot-I don't think there's any major plothole. In fact, I'm in love with everything in this universe, and one of the best thing in this is the plot. It's really engaging, and yet still light and focused-and did I mention engaging? True, it's guess-able by the middle part of the story who Yuri and Flynn really are, but that made the story even more exciting because I couldn't wait to get to the part that'll prove my guess was right. I also love how you kind of slipped in what happened in with the Lady and Vesperia and Askarin in the past and the battle with Strahn (and it was a reaaally nice tie-in to the canon fact!)and how in the end everything went back to that. I had to admit that by the time Yuri said "You died," I was practically breathless with awe. I really just absolutely love the idea of Flynn being a reincarnation of Askarin and how Yuri goes on search for him and Estelle for millenias. And even if probably for Yuri Estelle is just as important as Flynn (same goes for Flynn because she's the Lady after all), but-oh I don't know. It's just-the way you wrote Yuri and Flynn showed so much subtle love that it melts me all the way to the core.

Yuri and Flynn's interactions are intense-the way devil!Yuri kept teasing him and how Flynn was horrified by his presence and yet couldn't get enough of him in a sense, and how devil!Yuri started to fail to keep his mask on and how Flynn's confidence grew-I especially love the scene where Flynn realizes that Yuri's actually Vesperia and god, it was so perfect. I really love how Yuri looks suddenly harmless even though he tries to exude the dangerous aura and even though the atmosphere is dark, it makes everything the more intense and I absolutely, absolutely love it!

The-the so-called blasphemous pr0n was-phew-hot. Amazingly so. Especially because you didn't make it so explicit, leaving most of it to the readers' imagination and yet provides just enough necessary steam to get it going. But what I love the best is the mental image of Yuri running his fingers through Flynn's hair and Flynn grasping his hand just like that. Hnggggh-I am such a sucker for such fluff. You had me groveling on your feet by then. xDDD It's just the perfect moment for everyone to show up-blushing!Flynn is always welcome, of course. I have to stressed how much I love Rita's line of "manly emo tears", because it's just oh-so-Rita. Also how she reverts somewhat shyly as she greets Flynn, ahahaha. Very cute detail, and very well-written.

I love your word choice by the way, making the smallest detail seem so interesting and beautiful. They're simple and not complicated, easy to understand and yet poetic in a way-your description of the Temple and how important it is for Flynn at the beginning of the story is just simply, absolutely, brilliantly beautiful. To be able to put such emotions in simple description is amazing. And the wings. Somehow they fits the character-Yuri's wings had me go "Oh my God!" and Karol's wings made me smile because it's just cute.

And the ending-Fffffffffff, SO EPIC. I meant it. I was guessing that Estelle was the Lady, and when Flynn confirmed it and Rita went all "Fuck me", I just had to laugh. And let me tell you, the grin on my face didn't fade until much, much later and only two days after can I gather my more logical side of mind and type this review. Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for writing this and making my night. It's damn awesome in every way possible, and I still think it's one of the best fics I've ever read in every fandoms I've been. And if you've ever decided to write anything ever again in this universe, I'd be ecstatic to read. (Alright, I'll admit that I badly want to read more of this universe in any form possible. I've only been in love with a certain universe in Persona 4 fandom, and this is the second time I'm loving a fic so much.)

Again, thank you so much. I hope your eyes didn't burn reading my, uh, long nonsense rambling, but I wanted to let you know how much I love love love love love love (times a thousand) and enjoyed your work. Keep up the great work!

Brilliant oneshot. 3 Very creative and extremely well-written.

Hell, this was brilliant! :) Haven't had so much fun since Raven's passing out adventure in the Yumanju hotsprings! :D

Did you come up with the names of the Rings and the Guardians just like that? o.O They were amazing... :)

And the ending just perfect :) Plus no OOCsness at all, wow! I could totally see it all before my eyes :) Thanks so much for making my day a lot more cheerful :)

Maybe just work a bit on the sex scenes... could be a bit more explicit ;) For us fangirls at least...

Loved it. I really enjoyed this.

"You're sorry that you're such a dumbass and have self-loathing issues over something you had no control over, but now it's time you got your shit together because we're actually kind of tired of your manly emo tears.

LOL. Manly emo tears? Is there such a thing?

Gotta love Rita and her way with words.

For having been written as late as you claim, I think you did a fine job! There were a few typos, but nothing that takes away from the story at all. I loved it.

The whole thing was so well though-out and the presentation...I'm not sure I could ever hope to say enough. Really fantastic job on this. :D

This story is awesome and made of things I didn't know I wanted, but that work so, so well. That moment when Flynn realises who 'the demon' is is perfect.

This story is made of awesome.

Oh. My. God. *Yes*. I have always loved the whole mystic interpretation and Brave Vesperia!Yuri and seeing that someone else saw it is awesome enough, but seeing it written so *well*- just- yesyesyes. And the ending is perfect. God, this makes me want to write crazy Vesperiafic. 3

In short, this was fantastic. One of the best ToV fics I've seen. 3

:O OMG. This was wonderful (though I like it to be Flynn/Yuri, this story is really easy to just ignore that since it's just a bj :). 'Sides, who says they can't switch! XD )

I was really happy with all of the sword and shield stuff. There is not enough magical AU things. I like how you incorporated some game things in it too.

I was like NO YURI! You can't be Evil! (Though it would be tempting). As soon as the first two, Karol and Rita, had shown up I knew what it was hinting at, but I thought Yuri was gonna be just some helpful demon before that. But he was sooo awesome! Bravo!

After the bj: "Flynn feels lethargic and blessed out" I giggled at the blessed. :))