I really hope u update soon, ur storys got me on the. Edgg of my

Update!

YOou Go giiirllll Please update

oMG RUKA SCREAMS
and are koko and sumire going to be together in this fic or
really great fic by the way!

please make more and let me know when you edit it/them

that was funny

hehehe thats natsume

please update i like this its super funny! and i never guested that ruka and natsume wont get alo ng i like that! its funny and diffrent

You have a clever plot.

You had me right on the hook with your summary. I couldn't stop giggling just by imagining it. It really sounds awkward when Natsume said he needed a man

I figured you deserved a nice review for your effort and I encourage you to keep going. You just need to patch up somethings like the way you use pronouns. I think those are just typos.

You also lack details but it's fine. You'll develop it soon.

Really nice.

Waaahhh! I LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next chapter...

Can you just kill Luna? That is probably the only the thing that could make me happier. (I mean kill her now, not earlier in the story.) Anyhow, I just wanted to tell you that this story is AMAZING and thanks for writing it.

I really love your story but like ligeisa I think it's better than what you can expect from the summary. Haha, it was obvious they couldn't get along! Original to see Natsume and Ruka hate each other... I hope they'll be best friends though. Is Ruka in love with Mikan or just overprotective? Is he going to go out with Luna to try to get their best friends jealous? I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

Oh... my prince is a not so gentle and kind man. I really like Ruka... TT

anyways... I like this chapter. Hope you update fast. :)

o.O R-R-Ruka?

Definitely was better than I expected from the summary. Though I found that their relationship progressed a little too fast for my taste, it was decently written overall. One thing that I had noticed in your writing is that you tend to confuse the masculine and feminine pronouns like 'she', 'he', 'him', 'her' etc. so at times it's a little confusing to follow. Maybe you should just pay more attention to those when you proofread.