Do y'know what's worse?
I want to hate wardes because he was a villain AND dick in the anime
But godamnit his reasons are good

Gracias, gran trabajo.

For the love of Kara no Kyoukai, for the sake of all that deserves love on this site, please update this story.

This story is great. Correct grammar and spelling, for starters ;)

Really, it really annoys me how, in other fanfiction, despite Loius summoning vastly different people than in cannon, things stay so closely the same, as if neither the summoned person or the others have any agency. Boring and annoying!

I knew this story was going to be good when Mana killed in that duel - that's the first time I've seen that happen, and well, it fits.

Thanks for the writing!

I want her to have the ayes of doom death destruction xD

You put way to much detail in tnis story, and expand on things way too much. You don't have a healthy balance, especially in a story where the reader has knowledge of the world you are writing in. My advice is to trim it down a bit, and understand that your writing a story to people who understand such things, not children, because this comes off as if your writing to people who don't understand what is going on, and it's frankly insulting.

Thanks,
Warryn.

A most interesting story. I love the darker interpretation of the Familiar world. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Truly fascinating story. Like the Shinji series, it is a refreshing read with the over-saturation of canon clones.
Will it be continued at some point? Please do.

Interesting. My Nasu-fu is not good enough to decipher this Riddle. I am unworthy.

The Mami effect is in full force.

New suspect added to the list.

My first instinct would be to suspect Mana, given how the count already expressed interest in her, but I've read some of your stories already. You like to surprise the reader.
So I'm going to stand with the 2nd suspect, Matilda. The 3rd being a 3rd party not yet revealed, and actually cheating, since it's not known to the reader at all.

Fascinating fusion of settings, yet again.

Ok. So the Mami effect is in play. Got it.

Interesting. Didn't expect the next generation character to be the one used... She's definitely not the one that comes to mind when 'connected to the void' comes up.