I don't know why more people haven't reveiwed, so I'll leave one to help boost your spirits. I loved this idea, it was beautiful and I loved reading it. Thank you. There are MINOR grammatical errors and for the life of me I can't seem to refind them at the moment, so they must have been few and far in between. Very well written and well executed. I wouldn't mind a sequel to this story. If you have no ideas for it, I would love to help you brainstorm some.

Sincerely,

Angela A.

I loved it! it was awesome how you kept to the character's personalities, and your flow and grammar are wonderful. I liked the part where miroku had at least two dozen fruits in his robes *snickers*.

***** Five stars!

~Luna~

good story i liked it alot

CUTE story! ;D

Dude! He's evil! I was right! :O

AWESOME imagination! SO COOL! :D

Is this a bad god...? ./

i knew she brought da fruit! XD nuaughty kagome