Loved it! Sometimes cliches are the best!

awww I wish it was more too read it was getting very good

this is so funny and cute i died laughing

Loved this for two reasons. One, I used to work in a haunted house and this made me so nostalgic. Two, it's just so cute! Trust Vani to bargain with Ven for his help, great story.

That was cute. XD. I liked it. I'd definitely have been in Ven's shoes though. Not really a huge horror fan so a lot of things would probably scare me like that. Luckily for me I haven't been through a haunted house alone or gotten separated. Well... I might not have been easily scared by the 'hell' house now that I think about it... so I guess I would have been in the middle. Either way. Very cute, kind of creepy and well written. XD.

OMG, that was awesome! Really hope you write a sequel for this someday ;D

fuckin LOOOOOOOOOOVED it :D

I started to read this before I realized something: I've read this one before. Actually, it's one of my favorites. Why? Because it's the story that turned me onto you and your stories. Umm... that sounds perverse, but anyway! P

Is Ven really that fearful? (I've never played BBS.) *scoffs* And I thought I was a wimp...

~TCOStarlight

Try to claim this a cliche as much as you want, but I believe it's one in a kind w Looooove it 3

This epic on so many levels, I don't even-

Win.

Awesome! :'D just wished you had made it to more than a oneshot, but still good and creative ) I find the situation unlikeley, but it is fanfiction so i think its acceptable and good ')

*sigh* I wish this was more than a one-shot... :(

really cute story. i especially like the ending. great job!

Lol I love your sarcastic humour in this story! It's going REALLY great; keep rolling in the stories 'cause I can't wait for more! XD Write, write, write as much as you can, yeah? Cheers for the great story!

lol always so sure of himself!