Wow. What an intriguing plot! Highly creative and very well done. I enjoyed it very much!

That is a new idea and I really like the story!

Wow, that really just tosses you around... Really great job of it, I've had dreams like that myself where you can't figure out which is reality.. Bravo :3

this is officially awesome. Thank you for a fun read.

Freaking awesome and heartwarming! I love it!

Confuzzied... but like it:)

Oh, it's gorgeous *-* Pretty pretty please, continue it *-* PLEEEEEEEEEASE S2

I love it! This is amazing!

~Xela

Definitely WONDERFUL.

aw, mam Jareth was so broken it almost killed me! very good story

hmm... unique. i think i like it. it was quite unexpected...

very well done :)

Cute fic very detailed

God bless and the swearing could have been left out

You almost lost me at one point - it could only be in an alternate reality that that particular version of P&P can be even close to squee worthy. Gah - Kiera Knightly was the worst Elizabeth Bennet ever! (I was literally cringing with every scene she mangled.) And Colin Firth will always be my Mr. Darcy.

Ok, that being said, I feel much better. ;)

I did enjoy the story once I blocked out the P&P bit. I really liked the idea of her seeing her alternate reality and getting to choose. Must be weird to all of a sudden have new memories to reconcile. Although, I have a hard time imagining Sarah, as she was at the time, being reasonable enough to make the demands to send Toby home and that he be her equal. But, hey, this is a story about goblins and a mythical Labyrinth, so some suspension of disbelief is required. ;)

Enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing! :)

Very Interesting to read. Keep smiling. :-)

This is really good. Reminds me faintly of what my roommate is going to write for NaNoWriMo this year :)