Meh. It was corny. However, the writing is good. My sentences are short. Ba humbug!

I loved it! And I rarely love these types of stories!
Also

Shrek is love, shrek is life

Yeah, this was TOTALLY based off of Shrek. I LOVE IT!

STOP MAKING VALID POINTS.

I cried during the one in Fang. THIS WAS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I'VE EVER READ ON THIS SITE. Mhm, I'm not lying. It was good. -A

YAY! Wait, what am I cheering for? I'm so confused.

It is stuck in my head... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. You owe me. Another chapter, my good sir! Wait, you already did. Damn...

A tad? I read this story already and a 'tad' doesn't cover it. But that doesn't mean I don't absolutely love it. -A

Omg! I LOVE this story! It's kinda like sherk #1. I really liked this story!

I like the story but
Shrek much?

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant!

Aww, I loveit!:D

Aww! I love this story, a little fast in falling in love, but Amazing story, and I like the lesson taught at the end, and basic the cheesy fluff wasn't on overload, either, it was *"just"* right. If you put in the Iggy usually made food, and that Fang and Max had some kinds leadership roles, because it just isn't them, if they're not leaders.

PS. funny that their daughters' name is Phoenix, and mine is to, does it mean it a alternate fanfiction reality I would have Fang and Max for parents?

Probably no, but it cool anyway

-Phoenix :)

i loved this story!

i love this story!

it is soooooo gooodddd!