This first chapter has simply drawn me in. Painted such a vivid picture, I lost track it was only the first chapter. (hope that makes sense)

Fun crossover! Subtle knife and sherlock who knew that would be total gold eh?
I love the world building you did here to blend sherlock into this cross over was genius. Also the slow build on their relationship has this fangirl thrilled. Thank you for the great story and hope to see a conclusion on it some day :)

I meant materials, haven't read them in a while, sorry, continuing review from last time. I love this, it's epic

This, is an amazing fanfic. You've crossed them over seamlessly, the daemons fit well. Only thing is, I hope it continues. You've added in the 2 fandoms so well, it's nice to see some old things from HDA* being mentioned. Thanks for writing this story.
*His Dark Artifices

This story is so beautiful. Amazing. Please please please continue this amazing story.

A shame this one has gone unfinished...truly fascinating. It makes me want to go back and read His Dark Materials, as I never actually finished the trilogy. I found the gooden compass delightful...but got lost partway through the subtle knife. Thank you for furthering two fandoms with this work - thoroughly interesting.

I really thought, for some reason, that this fic was finished. Oh, well.

Hello ! I love your story, the deamons which seems so naturals to me it's incredible, the relationships... Oh and I love John and Risa, they are so strong and loving and loved it's heartwarming... I'd love to know the rest, if you ever feel tempted !
Sorry I'm not native speaker, but stories this good deserve the effort :)

Very fun... and very not done. Over a year of hiatus :(

I hope inspiration strikes and that you're okay.

So Mycroft's arrogance turned out to bite everyone in the ass this time. He should have let John keep the alethiometer. Oh well at least they didn't get John. :) Blind, and he still managed to beat four or so witches! I love BAMF!John.

Amazing! I love the golden compass trilogy and you tied these beautifully together. I'm exhausted from staying up so late last night because I couldn't stop reading! I normally try to give some helpful criticism but I honestly can't think of anything. The flow and style of the work is excellent and I can't wait to read more! There had not been a single story of yours that I have read and didn't like. You are a wonderful author. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.

This is my all time favourite story, I love it so much! Please update asap xx

This is amazing!
Please consider updating, you're actually one of my top 5 favorite Sherlock fanfic authors. These chapters probably take forever to write though...

I love how much attention you've payed to the other characters and how no one feels like an OC. It's all part of the world. How do you come up with these names?!

I guess the witches wanted John to... TAKE AN ARROW TO THE KNEE. *shot with death spell* sorry...

it has been a year and a day please update

This fic is amazing and going awesome! I hope you can update soon and good luck writing! :)