| Reviews for Patriot's Dawn |
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   Rain03 chapter 26 . 7/20 AWESOME! CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT IS TOP NOTCH. I found this through Hurricane Suite, and, man, you DO NOT disappoint. You are my favourite writer hands down. |
| Pandapartay chapter 24 . 7/17 Ooooooh more complications. Loving your work! |
| Pandapartay chapter 22 . 7/17 DUDE massive twist. You set it up so well too, kudos on your skills. Really loving this new direction you've taken ️ |
| Pandapartay chapter 7 . 7/16 OH MY FUCKING GOD . SHOCK. Scared to click Next now. Side note - good on you for surprising your readers. |
| Pandapartay chapter 6 . 7/16 Awww so cute! Look at them awkwardly feeling things for each other. |
| Pandapartay chapter 2 . 7/16 Ooooh you're switching it up! I'm liking the direction of your story so far. Delves into the universe we know and love but with new twists ️ |
| gytuj chapter 2 . 7/12 Why are you putting things like "bloody annoyance" is that a swear in some places? |
| baud001 chapter 7 . 7/11 Killing Asuma like this is a ballsy move, but I think it's a good idea. Just a little sad we won't see more of him, the way he was written is good |
| Uggghhhh chapter 13 . 7/10 WTF WHY? Why do assholes like you always have to ruin good stories that aren't tagged for a pairing or romance with this bullshit? |
| Daemon Anax chapter 2 . 7/6 While I did expect for the team assignments to be different , I didn't expect the ino-shika-cho trio to be different . The trio should be the same just because its been the same since generations and the legendary teamwork between the three clans had a high reputation and considering how close the three clans and parents of the 3 children are I thought it would still remain the same and ...I dont see a reason to change it . But even so , good enough i guess. I am excited for the ff and great. |
| huongdaoroma chapter 8 . 6/30 Holy shit, you actually killed off Asuma... I did NOT expect that but bravo! Made my heart heavy but I'm glad I found someone who decided to go away from canon in a way that was well-done! |
| nighttime.reveries chapter 25 . 6/23 A great read, could tell you had planned it out beforehand. Perhaps the best characterisation of Orochimaru, and a badass Naruto who questions his allegiance. Also I'm a mark for NaruIno so that is always great. Perhaps update the story summary/character tag to indicate the pairing? Looking forward to Nightfall |
| JustDusty chapter 5 . 6/12 You keep throwing around the shittiest excuses |
| you shall not know my name chapter 4 . 6/10 Twelve year olds talking like that is downright creepy... Other than that, good story. |
| you shall not know my name chapter 1 . 6/10 I like the dynamic between naruto and sasuke. |
