Haha I love this particularly the end witth Mal.

This was a funny and very enjoyable story.

I have to admit I always like the Wash gets Zoe type stories and you captured the three main characters perfectly.

I have to admit I was surprised Bester wasn’t killed or at least seriously maimed by his “Churns your juices” comment

Fun story!

He he he, I liked it alot. Lets hear it for Dinosaurs!

Perfect! I enjoyed a lot this story, so much that I found myself laughing at some parts!

Very well written, very humorous and light-hearted, with a nice sarcastic style. You did grasp the characters, especially Wash's bubbly, funny way of being.

Many parts to love:

"You're hot for the pilot dude." he offered, unbidden. "He churns your juices!

"Wash," he said, still with the smirking.

Zoe sniffed her armpits. "I guess I've been puttin' it off for a while."

And I love the whole paragraph that talks about "Wash was flicking switches and twisting knobs while he pressed buttons that needed pressing."

I found it funny the "tenable position" of the flying T-Rex as well as Wash understanding his "plastic pal", LOL1

But the story is full of "quotable" parts. Kudos indeed!

Aawww what a great story, and a great title. Thanks for writing this. I didn’t care for the movie but I loved the series and this has everything in it that I loved in the series. Thanks for giving Wash new life and for giving me a chuckle!

I like it. You really capture the lingo and the spirit of the characters. It reads like they would speak. Bit rushed to the end, would've liked more story in-between, "He bothers me less now" and "We're betrothed!" But I like stories, so I like 'em to last. Really enjoyed this story!

Very funny look at the bloom of Wash/Zoe romance. Lots of favorite lines to point out:

- It was decided. Zoe would kill the pilot as a warning to the mechanic. One dead, one warned. Not a bad deal.

- Now wait a minute Hobart!

- The killing should come soon so as to save space in her brain.

- He was being friendly and she wasn't stopping him. He gets to live another day.

You have an enjoyable style, funny, witty and sarcastic, fun to read. Some of your fun phrases were "He did adimant well, it should have been his middle name" and "the famous Reynolds trail, off into the black". I liked the "unload" scene with Bester and the images of barely fractured ice between Wash and Zoe, and the "mud and blood" that Mal and Zoe have crawled through together. I thought that two weeks is a bit fast, but I guess some people just know what they want? I thought it was funny that the excuse Mal used for both Zoe and Wash was that the other is intimidated by them, I've never seen a story where Mal has such a role in instigating Zoe and Wash relations.

Riona

This is just gorram PERFECT. Incredibly funny and bang on character, I loved every word of it. Thank you for making my day.