This was an amazing story! I’m glad I was able to find it, honestly top 3 Sherlock/John fanfics I have read so far which is a good amount. You’re an amazing writer and I love your take on the Great Game, you have both characters their time to shine. What I mean is sometimes people make Sherlock amazing and John less so then other way around. I love how you stuck the characters. Thank you so much for writting this!

This was fun - an enjoyable re-imagining of the great game. Thank you for taking the time to write and publish it here!

That was very well written for a remake of the Great Game, I enjoy the way the relationship built over the course of the story.

Well done, this is one for favorites,

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Kyaaaa so good! Love it

I loved your story, none of the characters felt off and the intrigue was great! I loved your Sherlock who kept his personality and it was one of the few stories that handled them crying very well. They didn't feel weakened or worse. So yeah, thank you for writing that and for sharing!

"You're the best decision I've ever made." Well if that's not some kind of "I love you", I don't know what is! I really really like your fic so far!

This is quite possibly my favorite fanfiction I've ever read. The characters were completely in character, John's and Sherlock's relationship took time and felt natural, and the new storyline was intriguing and sadistic! You are truly an amazing writer for 15 years old! I've already recommended this story to my sister. :)

Really enjoyed this story. I liked the way you took the development in their relationship slowly. Nice portrayal of Sherlock.

Love the story, well written and the story line was amazing! Thank you for writing such an amazing story.

I just finished chapter 9 and I'm willing to go on reading. The story is wonderful. Very nice plot and great writting skills. Thanks for the entertainment you've produced! :)

Wow, where the hell did my day go?! This is brilliant, I thoroughly enjoyed it!

Wow, that was an intense chapter! Firstly, I love the reference to Moriarty's quote in the show, 'I will burn the heart out of you'. I think it links in with the actual episode well but it's fantastic how you've made it your own. I like the representation of the relationship between Sherlock and John with the bodies. It's almost as if Moriarty knows exactly what's going on and is almost warning Sherlock not to act upon his feelings because he has changed in John's presence and no longer believes that 'sentiment is a chemical defect found on the losing side' and Moriarty wants to remind him. And - Oh, I'm babbling. Anyway, I've spent my entire morning reading this and it is fantastic. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this amazing fanfiction. It was just what I was looking for.

So...John just burst free and left Lestrade behind? Huh.

Lovely. Nicely-paced, slow character development and mature writing. Thank you for a lovely story and best of luck on your next ones!

brilliant, just brilliant!