WOW! This is brilliant!

you...should make more...in his point of view. you're very good at it. perfect. you should do the rest of the time he's in the faceless ones realm/ it make me spontaneously happy:)

I read this story a while ago, but since I'm new here as a member I thought I'd come back and review :)

I have never before become so engrossed in a story and then burst so abruptly into hysterical laughter- the mention of Serpine engaging in a robot dance just made my day! :P

I really like how this satisfies the want for more insight into Skulduggery's mind - I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. :)

Liking the mix of humour and darker thoughts, exactly Skulduggery. :)

Still a couple of typos, like the way 'Mademise' has an 'e' on the end XD

I love how he got a bit sidetracked on the whispering. I want to read it aloud now, just so I can growl that bit... (Ignore the weirdo, if you will.)

Yeah.

~Mademise Morte

Ah you dedicated me! I feel oh so loved! :D

- Holly xx

i dont hin youll ever understand how excited i got when i read that i got something dedicated to me :D i actually sponteneously danced and did alot of shouting ! so thank you alot and i loved this peice :)

That. Is. So. Awesome.

I love it. It's just, well, what's running through Skulduggery's insane mind. Singing and Dancing hallucinations, Serpine doing the robot? That was hilarious. I can't find any faults in this story.

Now I only have one more thing to say.

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