Just re read this story and love it! PLEASE come back to finish it! It is very good and deserves an ending!

Goddamn that’s hot

This has been a great read in fact the second time I've read it but like many other well written fantastic fictions it's not finished and it's often the great ones that get left.
Like many others I wish you would come back and complete it. It's just to good to be left like this.

Mx

I think I love his mom already! loved their first date!

Excellent idea and thanks for writing and I liked how you wrote the relationship between Alex and Olivia in this story.

“the South Pacific is just gorgeous. Angola has come a long way, still a ways to go.”

-ummmm? I’m so confused. Angola is on the Atlantic Coast?

I desperately need to know how this story ends!

Is this ever going to get finished? Your writing is very very missed around here. They don't make them like you anymore! I'd love to know how you were planning on finishing up this story.

i hope you have chance to finish this fic. i loved it

Are you going to finish this? I need to know how it ends!

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I'm rereading this story (because I love it, duh) and this chapter is just so amazing. You really capture the ineffable dynamics around relationships and individuals' experiences in life- that impossible (and often paralyzing) place where someone can see the destruction they've created and know that while they can do everything in their power to move forward, they can't change the past, can't change others' reactions, grudges, trust etc.

And also the whole element of surrendering/not having control over descent into dark places (for the bystanders as well- or, perhaps, mainly)
"It was Connors who took me away…there was nothing you could have done to prevent that…and after I stopped feeling sorry for myself, which didn't happen for quite some time…I realized how lucky I was to be alive at all. He was a highly skilled and trained assassin"

Anyway, I'm rambling, but just wanted to tell you how wonderful reading this chapter was! I'll have to check out that Pink song.

Would love more! Your stories keep me up till two am and later they're so good! Please keep writing! :)

Thank You for another great story. I hope you finish this one, but I LOVE Steppin Time and Double Time and would REALLY like to read more Erin, Olivia and friends. They are terrific stories. A very good friend of mine is very ill (Cancer) amd reading your stories are a welcome relief from chronic stress...so agin, Thank You

Very nice...