Reviews for Twice As Long As Forever |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Well this fukn sucks. I hate when the stories dont get finished. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so far I love is story please keep me posted I never liked Jacob and I don't think I will like him this time either. please keep me posted THANK YOU |
![]() ![]() ![]() :) love this. Looking forward to you continuing it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! Can't wait to see the rest! Please don't leave us in suspense for long? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very excited to see where this goes! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it x Thoroughly enjoyed it, looking forward to more x |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy cow. What a chapter. I am so intruiged. Jeez. I wonder if Bella is doing drugs... Greetings from Denmark. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Totally hooked on this one! Your writing is so amazing, I dont know how you do it! So brilliant at drawing us all in so much that . all we wanna do is keep reading! Jake really gave me the heebie jeebies - such an angry soul. Hope you can update this soon, you so left me dangling on the edge :) |
![]() ![]() YOU R VERY GOOD..TALENTED!I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome. Can't wait for the next part! I have a very bad feeling... :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() OHHHHH MY GOSH! I CANNOT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN! I'm in freakin suspense here, ahhh it's going to be great!(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm excited to see where this will go! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have no idea where this story is going but I am so hooked. I hope you update soon. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think this is a great story. I think Jacob is acting like he's using the drugs he was selling too. At first I was confused about Edward's and Bella's relationship; it wasn't until the diner sceen that I realized they had just been close friends until then and not bf/gf. I'm looking forward to the continuation of this story. I hope Jacob isn't in either one of their houses when they get their to get their suitcases for the trip. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This has hooked me too. I'm confused about what is wrong with Bella and why she is behaving so strangely lately. Jake is strangely intense and incredibly immature. Does he think he has a right to Bella? I can’t understand what all the strange noises at night and open windows etc. mean. I had guessed Jacob was luring Edward out of the house so he could get inside when Bella was there but now I can’t see what he is up to, assuming it is him. If Jake is just planting drugs, why would he keep going back and why hasn’t he reported it yet? I’m surprised Edward hasn’t mentioned any of it to Charlie though. I don’t understand why Jacob was back at Bella’s after he was arrested for drug possession or why Jake thinks Charlie would listen to him about Bella going to Hawaii after that. I’m excited to read where you take this, even though I have a very bad feeling about what happens next :-) |