Good start

its jiraya

itadakimasu!

If ur gonna make a harem u should have just said that in the beginning so people wont waste there time reading all of it..i dont really like harems b/c in the end theres not really just one relationship . you would have to deal with some getting jealous in the near future & then theres the developments of there relationships with all of them. So even if i love naruhina as a reader its annoying to see other young women who have never paid attention to naruto to lust after him just cause there desperate

This Is A Good Story Makes Me Sad I Was Not Here When You Were Working On It But I Digress Its Still A Good Fanfic I Hope You Will Continue It One Day But If You Dont Thanks For Those 20 Chapters I Loved Them

Um. I like the story but you forgot another smart guy but he's lazy as hell, shikamaru. Also where's the liud mouth kiba...? Just asking your doing great on the story though. Hope to read more. Well have a good day.

"Go to sleep."

Is Kurama's chakra gonna burn the seal away cause that's what should logically happen

near the end of chapter 6 when sasuke thought "it is my duty as an uchiha" sud "an uchiha" for " a duckass uchiha"? it sounds more appropriate than what it is.

Update soon this story is to good not finish it.
So plzzzz! Update soon

Your story is awesome! But when are you going to u

doin awsome man whens update?

Why cant you fuse
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Omg! I love the story! Can't wait for more chapters and to find what happened to naruto! So excited!

Great story so far, you did a great job with this it so far. If the Harem does happen pick your girls a head of time, and don't put a poll up for who people would like, it almost always ends bad for the writer, but do at least give people the benenfit of the doubt if they offer options. I've seen a lot of writiers have problems when they put the Harem options on a poll. Anyway I got an idea that I want to spin on ya. I noticed that Naruto has done a lot of good things on here including an assassin. If he continues with this path maybe you should add him to the bingo books somewhere. Although kinda hypocritical of me to say this but I see you adding Haku in the Harem, but I think three is a little low, but I see you having a small Harem only. Theres noting wrong with that, but all that I'm saying is think a little bigger. Instead of 2 or three, try as a challenge to yourself to better your writing at least four or five. A small harem stops being a small harem at like eight, and in no way am I trying to get you to that number, but at least try for four or five, just pick the girls. You seem to be thinking about Haku and Anko by the looks of your story so far, yet if you want a list of the girls that seem to have feelings in the original story, I will be happy to give it to you.