Hope you update soon, if at all. This is a very good story, and I hope that it will be finished eventually.

Good job so far.

Um, I was wondering what happened to the seeing-eye dog? Did he/she die? Because if so, shouldn't there have been a replacement?

I'm so sad that this is seemingly abandoned. D: Why are so many good fanfics like this?

Yes! The real JoKir starts at last! I love this.

This was a wonderful, beautiful chapter.

YES.
I love this chapter for reasons unknown. 'I'm not leaving until I find my brother.' I was just really moved by that line for some reason.

Gods...

Why must Fae names always have to do with colours? My friend Maeve always wears mauve ribbons, dress, and slippers, as well as her amethyst-coloured wings. That can't be a coincidence. Great chapter though!

Yes, touch is very important when you have no sight. Touch and hearing and smell. I like France when he's being sensible

Finally, my two favourite characters having a heart-to-heart! Thank you.

Wait... If he and Arthur haven't been in contact since he was shot, how does he recognise his presence? Blind people don't just instinctively know everyone's scent and movements in the very first meeting they've had since they became blind. It takes time, and practice. I'm not looking forward to the inevitable day when I wake up and can't see a thing no matter how wide I open my eyes.

Oh gods...

Wait- but- but- Didn't he hear the laugh? Why isn't he here?

I am going to assume that the Pearl Harbour attack, in Hetalian terms, was NOT Japan punching America in the face and making a tooth pop out.