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Wonderful.

Wow, how is this not in my favorites?

Excellent characterization - you captured Norman beautifully. Really nice dialogue, too. And what do you mean you've been re-watching the show on Thursdays? Where is it on TV? Or does your friend have videotapes?

This one is great. It's been a long time since I watched Mighty Max, but Norman always came off as cool. It takes power to be that calm until violence is called for.

And the villain was delightfully goofy and unimportant.

I'm so glad people haven't forgotten this show. It really was a good one. :D And as for this story, I really like the way you caught and held onto the characterizations. They are really true to the show. I also like the way you grabbed my (as a reader) attention, and held onto it. The pacing was excellent and the oneshot was VERY well written!

Very nicely done. I'd say you captured the main figures (and even the villain) of Mighty Max's world perfectly.

Norman is wonderful.

Thank you kindly for this tale in faith, friendship, and the way such things usually seem to happen.

Sincerely,

Miriam