This is so good. I hope the author will give this a chance. I love how you uniquely portray each character. The progress of the story is superb. That's why i'm craving for more. Seriously hoping that you'll eventually decided to continye this beautiful story.

You have any spirit to update this one? /

Cagalli and Patrick conversation makes me think if there's no Coordinator and Natural in GS or Patrick didn't hate Natural maybe Cagalli and Patrick would get along...
It's really a great story btw, I don't know why I didn't find it earlier. This story such a represent of GSD but with normal daily life story one (I mean no Coordinator and Natural). I like how Cagalli seems dominating their relationship, Cagalli who always makes the move first haha, and deciding things too. Just like in GSD Athrun looks so powerless... I really wanna know how the story goes when Cagalli back in ORB, tbh I want Athrun give up his job and tailing her instead of Cagalli... I hope you will comeback and continue this great work

I really love this part! when Kira found out on video call that his newly found sister show up from his best friend's bedroom ! especially the last part! haha

they resemble such a genuine couple, going between moments of longing and desire to these incredibly sweet tender moments where they realize how much they mean to each other. its truly amazing how well you've depicted this, and how you've paced this story in such a steady, engaging way. i've never felt bored reading this. please do continue!

they have such easy banter and clear chemistry, such a pleasure to read

i like how nervous he is when asking her out. all the characters seem so accurate to how they were in the show - cagalli being fiery, athrun being awkward at times, kira being endearing, etc. you're a talented writer, my friend!

even from the start, this was a truly engaging, intriguing story!

i know you stated the story would only be about 18-20 chapters. please do consider finishing it - this is the best story here!

This story is genius. I can't stop laughing. Litterally chocked on my food several times when Yzak talks to Dearka (the food processor lol.) PLEASE UPDATE. :D

Really an excellent AU fanfic, I can see the evolution of your writing in every chapter. Love this one i cant wait to see how they will manage. Maybe we will see an athrun in the beach soon?

3 Please update soon.

Absolutely LOVE this story! It's incredible! You're writing is witty and your characterizations of the characters is super on point! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon :)

I've loved the story so far! I think you have done well with keeping everyone in character and those are my favorite fanfics to read. Excited to stay with it until it's finished!

Just finished chaper one and I'm loving it so far! I'll have to binge read after work tonight and I'll review the rest. :)

OMG, a new chapter I'm so happy. I like the way you portray Athrun and Partick's relationship. It sounds like thing Athrun will tell his father in the seed series if Partick was still alive.