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Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2016 Loved it. Best I've read in a while! |
cortez30 chapter 1 . 7/13/2014 Cute and sexy not enough kybe NEED MORE haha |
Five-Princess chapter 1 . 4/30/2013 Great :) I loved it :) |
Lovely TT chapter 1 . 3/13/2011 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i love it. plz write more kyle and bebe fic. and i was listing to a song called moment 4 life by nicki mianj this was bebe moment 4 life. sooooooo sweet awwwwwwwwwwwww |
WendyTestaburger chapter 1 . 12/5/2010 Loved it! I loved the ending paragraph. [: I love how they were both so embarrased and blushing the whole time, it was very in character and awesome[: |
TheGirlInTheRedPoofballHat chapter 1 . 10/29/2010 Wow, South Park and het? I hardly ever read this stuff. I certainly liked your story. It was sexy and well-written; even though I am more of a Style/K2 (i.e. slash) person, I still enjoyed reading it. I like how you portrayed Bebe, too: very sweet and likeable, but with an edge. The problem I had was that it didn't really feel like South Park beyond the names and hair colours. Obviously they are older though, and it was certainly good in a literary sense. |
Coke-A-Cola chapter 1 . 10/29/2010 I am a HUGE only yaoi southpark fan but I must say you have turned me into a Kybe lover! This was just too cute! I kept squealing and giggling! It was just so fucking CUTE! Eeeeeee! It made my day! I loved it so! I am now a Bebe fan! I always liked her more than Wendy but now I support her fully! I think I'm gonna read another Kybe story after this review. DAMN YOU! 3 3 -goes to read while giggling- |
robert3A-SN chapter 1 . 10/29/2010 It's good to see you back, since your kind of stories are so rare around here - to say nothing of fics where Bebe is the shy one in bed. Now I can hope that you might add to your Butters/Bebe collection at some point as well. |
RetiredSPAuthorNo78 chapter 1 . 10/29/2010 God, I love Kyle's manliness in this one, it turns me on XD I so want him. I admit I dislike the way you wrote Bebe, despite it being IC, as far as that's possible to say with the apparent age-difference between the show and your story. Still, they do fit together, and they have some very hot sex XD which you, by the way, wrote perfectly. It had a decent plot and it fully succeeded in meeting the expectiations I have of a lemon entirely. Maybe the only negative thing being a few orthographical mistakes in the beginning, but f*ck that. I love it, keep it up :) |
Lavis.LOve chapter 1 . 10/29/2010 Oh that was so...amazing! There's nothing else I can say. This is gonna go into my favourites cous I love it soooo much. |
KyleFan1994 chapter 1 . 10/28/2010 Thank you so much for posting the first quality het smut on fanfiction in MONTHS! I loved it! Very sexy. Haha, Bebe's so funny. I loved the ending, bathtubs rock. |