Now maka, venture forth to tell your real last name, let usagi(I'm beginning to think that's some sort of fish) and your self reunite as friends and lovers. ' I'm beginning to sound like a preach '. Lolz

I loved it all, please continue!

Loved it loved it loved it! It was awsome!

I loved reading it and the storyline is enjoyable

nakanangtot. kim to yow.

di ako naglog in kasi ibang comp gamit ko, comp ni bom2. asdfghjk; haneeep.

Hi Lola! Please update soon daw oh. :)) The story was ozum, btw. Take care. ;)

nooooo! You have to update soon!

Isn't this from a Gakuen Alice story? Didn't you steal this and just switched the names? That's not right. You should confess already.

I love it! The storyline is great! Please update soon!

I see some mistakes in your story, with past tense and things like that. You'll say something like "On that night Maka had a strange dream. In her dream was a shark living alone in the vast ocean. No one ever dares to approach it nor look at it for they are scared for their lives. The shark looked at Maka." where some words are pat tense and others make it seem like it's happing a you read it. You might change it to completely past tense, like this; "On that night Maka had a strange dream. In her dream was a shark living alone in the vast ocean. No one ever 'dared' to approach it nor look at it for they 'were' scared for their lives. The shark looked at Maka." Other than tht, keep up the good work!

This is awesome. I wonder who the shark represents...

that was awsome!

The story is getting more and more interesting!

It's sweet that "Usagi" remembered Maka. I wonder why all the name changes? Very interesting!

Please update soon! :)

AHH! You updated! Sweet! I loved this chapter! Ohime-sama! That was Soooooooooooooo cute! It reminded me of 'World is Mine' by Hatsune Miku. I Love this story! PLease keep updating!

ooooh cant wait for the next chpter please hurry with the next update!

This was good! Please update soon!