Well-written pieces like this are tough to come by. Angsty without the cliche and very realistic. Great story.

That was beautiful

Oh I love it

Yeah, I more or less had the exact same idea by the end of KHII. Sora, Riku and Kairi have already spent most of their key formative years as the ultimate adrenaline junkies. Somehow I doubt that they're capable of suddenly settling down in Suburbia after becoming nigh-demigods. Still, nice concept and excellent exectution. Well Done man.

I can tell how hard you worked on this, and how much you put into it. I wish I could give you the review you deserve, but all I can really say is that you did a good job.

~Tangerine

That was really well done. You described exactly what I think would happen, realistically, when they got home, and the ending was just perfect.

This story is really deep; I'd expect after the initial want to returning to Destiny Island after their journey, they would feel some sort of disembodiment to the everyday routine they had before.

You captured the emotions very well and kept the character in character, great job!