I think Dawn's dream will come true.

I hope Steven changes and becomes a good angel.

Yeah! Good for Chris. I can't wait for Dawn to wake up and I also wait to Carlisle's reaction to the angel maybe the next chapter or two...

That was awesome Dawn's part. Carlisle probably started to freak out. Probably Edward to.

I feel sorry for you hardly anyone likes this story and yet you continue to make it so long usually if not a lot of people review the author stops but you have made this a very long story even if it is boring and filled with useless crap but hey good for you to continue even though it sucks

I love the story so far, but i hate the valvo scene. you do realize that that scene was basically 'OMFG, i saw a car! cars mean i'm in twilight!', right? I get what you were trying to do, but... yeah, valvo's a flashing, but not nearly as uncommon as she made it sound.

Ok, im so sorry to fill ur review box with pettiness but "what a b1tch" is such a bitch. Im sure that this person does this in their many hours of free time and just has no life. Maybe she/he wants attention or just has an urge to take their excuse of a life out on other peoples hard work and writes stupid reviews like this. Im sorry i just had to get that off of my chest. This story is great and i cant wait to read more.

Ok, im so sorry to fill ur review box with pettiness but "what a b1tch" is such a bitch. Im sure that this person does this in their many hours of free time and just has no life. Maybe she/he wants attention or just has an urge to take their excuse of a life out on other peoples hard work and writes stupid reviews like this. Im sorry i just had to get that off of my chest. This story is great and i cant wait to read more.

Hi daddy!

how did you turn into a minion?

you did a great job on this chapter... love it... update soon...

you did a great job on this chapter... love it... update soon...

you did a great job on this chapter and the story so far... love it... update soon...

you did a great job on this chapter... love it...

WHERES THE REST OF THE STORY! IT STOPPED! IT STOPPED! :'( I WANTED IT TO CONTINUE *starts crying..* please update sooon... *pulls a cut adorable face that noone can resist or ssay no to..* pwease?

heya.. i like your story, but i just wanted to point out an error about halfwy through chapter nine when chris is thinking how the stoires going, shes going through imprints from the book... instead of saying sam and emily, quil and claire, jared and kim... youve got paul and emily... just thought id let you know