I am really happy that I found this fanfic. Its awesome. Your oc is very cute and interesting. I like her very much. And its good that she is a Christian.
I think this is best oc story for me.
Especialy i like Midnight and water of mars chapters.

This line:
I'm not saying we shouldn't save them," Viera rushed through the words as soon as she found her voice again. "I'm not. But we can't do it because you feel like it's your right to play god. There's only one God, Doctor, and you're not him."

This is what I thought when I watch this episode but couldnt form it in my head in words like you did. Great job!

And in Midnight I was so happy that Viera was with the Doctor and protected him :3

I so want Doctor and Viera to get married ;3

But Adeline death is a fixed point you just can't change that. That's why she killed herself in the first place. You've literally mess with history don't get it.

I'm pretty sure you aren't meant to mix Alcohol and medication. Also I don't at all understand why she saved ianto and Steven yes I get its for jack but she's only met him once before. I love this story but I really didn't enjoy the saving them story bit seems too convenient.

This is awesome!~

This is an amazing start to what seems like it'll be an amazing story

I remembered reading this before, at least the first two parts. Oh this is going to be an absolute delight to read this whole thing!

And a bit of tears, given Children of Earth.

Really enjoyed this story. Thanks for writing it!

Your story is awesome so far! I've only read the first seven chapters, but It is very well written. I love Viera's character as well, I can easily sympathise with her. I'm a christian too, and I'm a lot like her in many other ways. The way you wrote her is probably what I'd be like if that had happened to me. Viera is really someone I can relate too, and that's what makes this story even more fantastic. I can't wait to read the rest :D

Viera is a nice OC.

I've not finished reading, and I will in a minute and leave you a couple of reviews for each of the parts etc. But I just wanted to point out (and sorry if someone already has, or this seems really arrogant or whatever) but you've got Viera saying she was "In England. Cardiff to be exact." I'd just thought I'd let you know that Cardiff is in Wales, not England. Sorry, if you've already addressed this. Looking forward to continuing reading.

Is it strange that I remember baking cupcakes and listening to this particular episode?

I must say, I really do like this idea you've come up with! I can't wait to read more of it!

I love your story! Can't wait for the next chapter.

i hope Jack is okay, i'm sure he will be. more alright than he isin canon, anyway.

i loved the little scene at the end. Ten and Viera are an awesome pair, platonic or otherwise.

Really? You only did this because I asked you? Wow, I feel so important.

...Okay, ego trip over with, I don't mind Viera just being along for the ride this time - technically speaking, so was the Doctor (it IS Sarah-Jane's show, after all, of course her group does all the hard work).

Keep up the good work.

Zim'sMostLoyalServant signing off.