You made wish that thisnstory was Canon so bad. Matter fact eff it I will conaider it canon anyway. I wish you didn't abandon this story but that will not stop me from reading it again

You did good with expressing emotions in this chapter

I wish this story didnt die. Because the emotions conveyed here is very good.

CTRiN00
I agree. This story is the best thing I read anymore. I want to see the ultimate conclusion.

I would love to keep on reading this story I’m just not so sure the author is gonna keep going it’s slowly killing me inside lol

Goddamnit, rule 1 and 2 on how to kill interest in your story due to readability?

1. Flashback flashback flashback flashback flashback flashback flashback flashback flashback flashbackflashback flashback...

2. "Hey let's put pointless song lyrics all throughout the damn chapters multiple times and annoy the hell out of the readers while they're trying to read the damn story in between all the flashbacks and song lyrics, because obviously this thing needs a soundtrack and I should force them to read one randomly, thereby killing any sort of momentum the story has at the point that I decided to get cute with it by inserting those lyrics I obviously love so much."

And because I can tell this will be a running theme in this story, a bonus number 3!

3. FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK FLASHBACK...

Please continue this very beautiful story of love

Are you going to continue with this amazing story? Please do!

Ah, this is an awesome chapter, the love between Ichigo and Rukia. Can't wait for the next one

Is this story over? i need to read more DX

I compliment you on your action scenes, they are thought out, practical, and exciting to read. I am going to restate my earlier review though, every single long and great scene has been Rukia. I am just disappoint that when Ichigo or anyone else is involved he only gets a few words and a quick summary of events. No one else is getting any chance to shine in the story even though it gets getting made out like they would have an oppertunity. You skipped over the week of training even though it would have been cool to see some action from the two, maybe sparing. The patter is getting predictable amd frankly a bit boring, which is upsetting because its so much fun to read these scenes, but if its always going to just be people watching, commenting on Rukia's fight as she dominates then its dull. This scene is almost a mirror of the Renji scene, and I guess I just expected more and better out of the story. Anyways good writing, just wish we got ro see more of the other supposed title character doing more outside of the relationship like Rukia.

I really like the story so far. My only problem standing at this point is that Rukia seems to be the one always sacrificing or always suffering for their relationship. So heres hoping that Ichigo steps up to the plate soon.

...Seriously how hard is it to say nothing happened, that would be it.

Eighth time reading this and I still wait for the next chapter. Don't let us down PLEASE!

So it has been a very long time since I read bleach fanfiction partly because I stopped reading any fanfiction near the end of bleach, but recently I saw a bleach fanfic in the favorites list for an author I was reading at the time and have since been hunting down old favorites from the bleach section. One binge read later and I can remember exactly why I loved this story and can only hope that your muse returns at some point as I would love to see this finished