Yum.

Ah much yum.

So much yum.

Just.

Eeee hee hee.

I think that was the best Hetalia sex scene I've ever read.

It just seemed like... It was more than just a sex scene, y'know?

Everything was very England (Not just the character, like, the whole country.) All that ancient power and stuff. And rain. Lots of that.

Anyway, it was awesome.

Oh wow, I think I may have read this under some of the best circumstances possible. It's the middle of the night and a tropical storm is just beginning to hit my little city. The rain's still out on the ocean, but the wind has come in ahead of it and it's screeching against my 6th floor window and rattling the neighbor's clothes' line and it keeps going loud and soft, and then loud and soft again and, yeah...anyway, listening to a storm while reading about sex in a storm, pretty freaking awesome.

I love how you write porn with pronouns. It always seems more...I dunno, intimate? or something...

ps. I'm working on that drawing of Arthur, but I'm not very happy with it yet...

I'm so jealous of your writing ability...this was amazing...

I know exactly what he means. The other day it stormed here and I stood in the backyard with my shirt off. I desperately liked this.

This...this is how nations make love. Fierce. Land-spanning. Makes the earth shake.

I would advise you to be less repetitive with references - you used "his lover" so many times. You could have used character names.

Ouch. This is going to hurt. *cringes*

Apart from that, I liked this piece. There's something primal about having sex during a storm; it's like connecting to the nature, the cycle of life... yada-yada, sounding like some new-age adept here, hehe.

But it's nice. The story, I mean.

This. This right here. This is beautiful, and I am so incredibly glad that I read it. 3

You are amazing. God this was beautiful. Definitely one of my fabourites of yours yet. Email it to me so I have a copy please please please! Can't save stuff here argh. But anyway I really really love this. The magic, the raw power, the stripping away of everything until all that's left is the wild, reckless thing he actually still is... Argh 3 so good.

LOL sex beneath the rain? 8DD

I'm so lucky because I read this when raining X'DD

Gorgeous depiction; bravo!