Lol I love this story

This is absolutely hilarious! OMG, like laughing out loud. You have a knack for keeping the boys in character, telling a damn good story and throwing in a fair amount of crack to boot. Good god, I wish you didn't stop updating this one. It makes me sad.

I forgot to add this in the last comment - FINALLY! Someone makes something for Marko's unusual pigeons.
Man I was hanging on David's every word... Makes me think of the theory that the widow Johnson is actually his maker and not Max. But gross... drinking some old hag's blood *barfs* XP Poor David!

:P I did not want to imagine Marko shirtless... Dwayne or Paul sure but not Marko. His jacket already freaks me out enough. And now that I read this chapter its making think... What color was David's shirt in the movie?! 0_0 I don't remember at all! And I've watched the movie so many times!

Poor David... getting blackmailed into getting stoned. Wonder what crazy things the two are going to do XD

;3 nice story. I seriously couldn't stop laughing. Especially about David's comments on Paul's downstairs :D Paul's so cute pointing out he can keep his clothes dark... and the ending! It just made me feel sorry for David. I seriously wonder who made their laundry white.

Great chapter. i can't wait for the next one...i wonder what Dwayne and Marko are going to do to David and Paul :)

Finally you updated:) I love how Paul was complaining about not getting laid, and talking about "the witch". Eww, I don't think I would ever wanna meet her either...Update soon, please:D

this was a great chapter, this story is so fun i can't wait to read more :)

Oh my god, this is priceless. I totally caved when you wrote that the pigeons would do what Marko said, whether it was shitting on them all. I couldn't help myself and laughed aloud. I think some people looked over at me:O Anyways, seriously update:D

Oh man, this is priceless!

Please update soon - I'm dying to know how it all pans out!

A.

Really quirky, engaging stuff. I loved your wonderfully aware narrative voice, your intricate, affectionae character studies. This is seriously entertaining. A little crit, though - you might want to break up your sentances. They're wonderfully long and poetic, a feat which suits the fic's offbeat style, but occasionally a comma or a divided sentence into two sentences would really fufil the potential for flow and comedic timing. Also, beware of them getting a little confused and over complex(punctuation would really smooth that out) but really, this is a lovely, original piece.

Happy writing!

Red

Red

LMAO Oh the imagery of those boys prancing around in their boxers, and Paul in his white-err, pink socks! :P Loved it! Hope you update again soon! x

PMSL. I love it :-) This is so different. I can just picture it happening oddly enough. Freakin' great job! I cannot wait to read more! x

Oh my gosh! this was too funny :)i hope you keep this story going :)