I was sort of hoping we'd see the witches using their elemental magic and we did! yay. Interesting idea about the darkness beyond Termina and the borders being strange. I wonder where you're going with this.

That was intense. This is scary...very well written.

It's taking Link a long time to put two and two together about the dimensional clones. I guess it is a big thing to swallow. I almost want to stay up all night reading this lol

Ok that is certainly an interesting way to do things. I can't wait to see how this twist plays out.

I was wondering...is Mr. Ink just something you made up to allow for the Deku speech impediment? It must be. Also, this slipped my mind before, but interesting take on Navi treating like like her child. I suppose a guardian fairy would be like that but I always saw them more like a sibling or a friend with the Great Deku Tree as parent.

Ok, I have given up all hope of trying to predict anything. I'm just along for the ride now. I never would have thought of coming up with this chapter. So powerful and bittersweet. I always imagined that time truly reset and that there wouldn't be an alternate Tatl but you seem to be going the other way. Even if I'm right, that doesn't negate that Link lost a friend, he lost that version of her.

On another lighter note, I forgot to mention this in my last review. Does it make sense for people of Termina to refer to the Golden Goddesses? I thought they were Hyrule specific but as I type I realize they are outside of time and space. We meet their Oracles in other places beyond Hyrule but that's probably the same world... I don't know. I guess we really don't know much about the deities of Termina...outside of the giants it's a bit of a mystery.

Oh...my...gosh! What a chapter! The way it is in the game is nothing to this. Just...wow.

Pulling no punches on the battles, I see? Awesome! I actually winced and clutched my own arm as the Skulltula tore through Link's. Action scenes are one of my weaknesses so I always appreciate them when they are done well.

Now that's a cliff hanger! This is real page turner!

Wow I did not see that coming! Tatl just up and left. This is good.

Another fine chapter. You're covering details I would never even think of. For example, it never even occurred to me that Deku Link may have difficulty speaking. It's sort of educational from a writer's point of view.

I am loving this so far. I wanted to wait as I hope to someday cover some of the Zelda games myself (already started my version of Ocarina) but that could take forever with my writing tendencies. I just couldn't wait and I'm glad I started. I can tell this is going to be an interesting and amazing ride.

Wow...just Wow.

I can't even really describe how much i loved this story, this might just be the best Zelda fanfiction i might have ever read!

The love and care for this is beyond words, everything is perfect.

I really want to see a Wind Waker sequel / plot in the same universe, although i know its far too much to ask for.

Just binge read this and the light spirt you have to been one of the best authors I have ever had the joy to find both in fan fiction and full novelization if you ever make a book please post a story saying so your righting is so impactful and you have so much talent your still responding to reviews all the way up to July of last year your passion skill and dedication are amazing any content from you, original or fan made would be great please keep writing you are to good of an author to waste such talent

Recommend me some stuff, plx. I have just finished this incredible story (the only good fanfic on any site ever, prolly), well worthy of being a professionally published piece, and now it feels like I have nothing to fill my time.

Nothing good enough, anyway.

Also, by stuff, I didn't meant fanfics. Comics, manga, anime, even video games, anything you can think of.