Hahaha. Well she sure did show him didn't she? Girls can't pull pranks indeed.*snort*

Alright so lets begin.

The story flowed nicely and was cute and funny. Dom scared me a little but though *bwahaha*

The characters were mostly like-able and believable. Although it was short you could tell everyone's personalities from the few lines they were mentioned in.

All in all a good story, sorry it took so long to review and thank you for joining the competition. :]

Very nice job. I think you wrote Roxy perfect. I also liked how you proved James wrong.

thanks for the great story.