Very good

Omfg! I see 2 to 3 movie spinoffs from this novel. Certainly my favorite yet. Thrilling

I think you should worry about making enemies with writing such as this. I know Steve and Stephanie Perry would top that list c as well as a handful of orher, published ALIENS franchise authors. I dare say (with A. Nothing held back in either an attempt to coddle or be nice, or B. An attempt to gain fans for when I post my own tales of xenomorphica) you are a phenomenal talent. Chapter 1 done, and rarely have I ever anticipated so eagerly the next installment.

Thank you.

nice reference to the Predator and AVP movies, though it seems Predator 2 and AVP 2 was left out. Meh, oh well

I am guessing the Architects are are reference to Prometheus' Engineers. Again, the Xenomorph in the third Alien movie actually came from a cow, not a dog

uh, I would like to point out that the Xenomorph in Alien Cubed (or three) was actually from a cow

This was an absolutely fantastic story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. I like how you incorprated the Predator movies into the story and the ideas about the Architects and creation of the Aliens. Definitely one of the most absorbing and thought provoking stories I've ever read!

The overall story was fantastic. The ending in my opinion left a alot to be desired. It still doesn't take away from the story in it's whole, I just believe the ending could have ending well better lol.

V.

this is really good. I look foreward to reading the rest. It's well worth adding to my community.

Magnificent.

I'm at a loss for any more words to describe this fanfic's quality.

Absolutely stunning plot and developments, excellent and intelligent writing; this fanfic is a serious competitor for first place in my best-alien/predator-fanfic-contest :-)

I've read this first part now, chapters 1 to 3, and right from the start, it's captivating. I truly feel like being in the movies. It's scary for the chance of something happening, there are intrigues, your artificials are 'in character', your human characters are wonderfully divers. And you've really made me wonder and puzzle about what will happen next - can't wait to read the next section!

Ello'

My compliments to the Chef... This is one of the most in-depth and consistent appellations of the aliens series I have had the pleasure to read. Your work should be submitted for publication. Excellent work on an already deep litterary work... Bravo

J

Bravo! You are a very tallented writer! this story is a good read,keep it up! Though honestly,I cant see/understand why this story is classified as a horror fic? I did not find it disturbing one bit! good writing true,but perhaps as more of a drama piece. this story plus your epic Lord of the Rings fic deserve more reviews! My only real bone to pick is that your stories are far too "emo" for my general taste... You could put in a little bit more action and adventure,specially your Lord of the Rings fic. All in all,though not my cup of tee,still a very high-quality piece.

Well dayum

Other than it being all one page instead of broken up into chapters (which makes no real difference anyways except readability), all I can say is ...

Well dayum.

I've not often seen anyone tie all the elements together around the derelict and the cues from one brief glimpse in the original movie like this.

It did feel like the Predators were put in haphazardly until they found their feet as it were, but to be honest with the flow of the rest of the story it wasn't all that noticeable.

About the only thing I think was left unresolved was Eleanor's sense and knowledge as they travelled closer to the Architect homeworld. That and the end revelation of the changes to humans and artificial's were the only parts that I thought got left unfinished.

NICE work.