I'm guessing the red and yellow kids are Sunny and Sides. They strike me as the types that would've been bullies as kids.
it looks like Starscream is having some trouble with authority. Obviously that trait never left him.

Look forward to reading more of this :)

Aww baby Starscream is so cute.

I like how you've explained some of the parental instincts of Seekers, that they can be violently protective. It is very interesting.

There are a few small spelling errors throughout this chapter. Nothing big enough that it disrupts the flow of the story though.

Well done on this chapter. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.

Aw little Blue... I'm sure you'll see little Starscream again! Dont you worry none! But that bastard Silverspire was an aft and deserved to be maimed! You never hurt a sparkling, especially not a seeker sparkling, especially not where its creator can see!

That was darn awesome and so cute! :) I thought I was the only one making TC and Warp Star's creators...

Aw damn! Baby Starscream is just too cute! And such a bright little guy! His creators are so proud!

dawww so cute loved this fic so much

Aaaaaaaawwwwwww so cute.

Super cute awesome story hope write more

A lovely series. Thanks for sharing!

Awhe this is so adorable! I love the quirks youve built up in Statscream's relationships with others :D

I do have to point one thing out though - because this story is pre-earth, you can't refer to Blue as a Datsun and the twins as Lambos cause these are the names of their earth alt modes. Other than that, everything was amazing

I don't generally like fics that are this au, but this is just to sweet! :) I"m going to pretend the war never happened, so all of this can have a happy ending... Thanks for posting!

This was such a sweet story!

:)

This story was so adorable I almost melted!

Great story!

But did you have to pair up four mechs

It would of been alot better if you paired up femmes with the mechs