Beautiful! So fucking beautiful!

Oh Merlin that was amazing! I mean my otp is Soriku but ive always loved leonxsora too so having both happen (no matter how roundabout) in the same story was truly epic!

I'm glad Sky got a happy ending with Leon :) Loved this addition to Hourglass! Can't wait to read the next one!
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So glad you finished it! I was a little worried since it was not marked Complete. :-P

I don't normally ship Leon/Sora, being more of a Leon/Cloud fan, but I really enjoyed your Hourglass series and Sky/Leon really worked well. I really enjoyed this series, almost more than *gasp* Hourglass. I see a more maturity in your writing and you got better with the fighting scenes. And that is a meant to be straight compliment, btw, not a backwards one. I enjoyed both stories. :-D

I hope you continue this fic! Loving it so far. :-)

Just awsome. Hot sex and a sense of hope lingering in the ending like that. A sequel and a prequel in one! Hah! Very well written! I loved every minute of reading it!

Great chapter, not as intense as the previous, but still great! One thing I noticed: you wrote "Sazh shouted, getting around besides the scientists"... I think you mean behind, not besides, right?

Anyways, I like how Sky restrains himself towards Hojo as he thinks about Leon in the end. Nice touch to show how much he's being affected by living in this new timeline, back with friends and a relative peace. Character development!

O.o I figured Kairi would be involved somewhat... but Roxas vanishing... and that insanity-stuff... just... wow... This is one heck of a great chapter! Explains a whole lot of stuff about Sky and the way he acts. I have to take a moment and breathe to calm my racing mind and heart here, 'cause this was intense. You're a really good writier of this angstyness-stuff. Emotions being explored and logically explained as caused by traumas that are in fact belivable to create exactly those feelings... I adore you. This has to be the best sequel ever! Onwards!

Gods, this is one tough chapter... poor Sora/Sky... no wonder he changed... The Roxas-part is interesting too! There are a bunch of grammatic mistakes here, mainly a shifting tense and some missing words. I suggest reading through it slowly and be alert for mistakes. ;) Awsome though...

Ooh, a last name for Sora! Nice service there. :) Now, I'll have to hit the bed or I'll be a zombie tomorrow... LOVE your work! Keep it up!

Drats, I'm stuck reading... You're an awsome writer and the characters truly come alive through out the story you're creating! Sky's dialogue is brilliant, btw. X3 And snapping at Mickey like that - wow. I mean, calling the friendliest face in all of Disney's arsenal a cold-hearted killer like that, it's not something one gets to hear/read about everyday. And very believable. Terrific! now I'm on to the next chapter! I'll read until i fall asleep on my keyboard... XD

Great. Now I have to continue reading another chapter... darn it... I need to sleep... X3 Superb as usual. Two things that I came across though: it's "a gentleman" if it's one guy. "gentlemen" implies several guys.
And you missed writing out "of" in two places, the line being " what Sora was capable ..." of fits very nicely behind capable. ;) Otherwise: awsome. And I love having Rafiki do the "speech" with Sora. XD

Too intense to stop reading... Awsome action! And two really intense battles in one chapter? Are you for real? Awsome work!

I'm clinging to every word like a drug-addict to a fix... seriously... can't stop reading this... a few typos were noticed, but nothing serious enough for me to point them out, unless you wish me to. Love the drunken heroes! X3

I have to say I'm very glad to read this follow-up on the awsome Hourglass-story. I truly love Sky as a character and I find your story so far to be very good, intreaguing and exciting to say the least. When I read Hourglass, I felt like I read something truly original, which doesn't happen too often in the world of Fanfiction. Your writing is skilled and your story building is ecceptional! I'm not pulling some prank here, I'm serious! Great work! Now, I'll continue to read this epic adventure as it goes on into the future... ;) Marvellous! :3