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You know how it's kind of awkward when you read a story, and the name of the main character is really similar to yours, or someone you know? I once started to read a fantasy romance book and the female lead had the same name as my mom. I couldn't finish it because I kept thinking of her.
Well that happened here too. Or, close to it. I feel I am unqualified to give an actual review because my view has been swayed. But I did enjoy this story, and look forward to parts 2 and 3

I was giggling throughout the whole thing. I can't wait for part two and three.
For the love of Arceus on a stick, this was funny!
This was just perfect. Peeeeerfection. I can't wait 'till you update! : )

oh dear I absolutely love this! I know that this was written quite sometime ago but would you consider posting parts 2 and 3? I really want to know what happens next.

Ohh how to teach N about Human baby's the Pidgy's and the Beedrill's
really cant wait for more.

OMG i had so much fun reading this and the comments i had a giggling fit at the awkward ness of the whole thing i would like you to right more but i also dont think you need to

anyway BYE! :)

Swallow the egg?LOL this story is really funny. N doesn't have a single clue about pregnant women. Anyway all this reading of fanfiction my mom is finally gonna let me have my own account! I just love these kinds of stories and I hope you other vewiers like mine.

I can actually see this happening! N is so naive. XD You did a pretty good job of writing things from N's clueless POV.

*has a giggle-fit over N thinking White actually swallowed the egg*

cuuute! well written too! :D

That was your first attempt? I don't believe you! That chapter was amazing, please tell me you'll be writing more~ There just has to be more, I really love the way you write N. Very Nice Job! In fact a fantastic job if I do say so myself.3

This is so cute! though I find it funny that they are sleeping together and such before she stopped him, but its cute all the same_ I love how you used terms that make sense in the pkmn world too:3

Now, I think you should continue this. Even if just a while in the future, and the kid is like, 5(or even turning 1) or something and ether N again looking back over the time gap, or White this time doing the same. I think that would be really cute_

(and btw, as for your name poll, I use Scarlet for my chara every game. I think that might make a cute name for a girl_ and I love how you added periwinkle. that is an epicly awful name.)

For the love of all pokemon, will someone give N the pidgy & combee 'talk'

Brilliant fic though, gotta love N's innocence

This story's so cute, sweet, and hilarious at the same time. I couldn't even recall how many times I giggled and facepalmed myself at N's thoughts of 'Egg'.

I love Miju as well~ please continue, continue, continue! You've to finish this!

Oh my gosh, this was so cute! I melted into a pile of giggling goo. Lol.

Please continue this!

This is hilarious! I died just a bit from this, haha.

U should! u should! i loved it!