God, that was beautiful.

Dang, this one gave me the chills. It's seriously beautiful, the composition of words and the overall power of the work. Ugh, write more! I beg you! XD

wow I have now a new OTP!

wonderful writing;D

god. this was good. I really adore this pairing, there's something so appealing about it- and you captured that appeal excellently in this short one-shot. The religious themes are fine, I quite liked them. THe comparisons were very nice as well. great job. (:

brilliant... just... wow. its perfect. its THEM. this is too easy to see and too easy to fall in love with. perfect.

I seriously loved the rich religious connotations you hid in here, along with the ones you openly stated. This is so deep. I could read this ten times and still not understand it completely. Favorite couple too, I really hope you write more. :D It was beautiful.

~pinkhearter13

Wow, I'm kinda loving kinda depressing with it (as I always be with angst fics, and yours almost made me cry); the way your put Vincent as a sadistic and Ada as a little angel and as the sinner Eve was awesome; your language and vocubalary and the way you described the things of this story sounded like poetry for me. Really well-done.

I love this couple! And I loved and put to Vincent as sadistic! not really imagine any other way. Hontoni sugoi! * O *! I hope you continue writing about this couple, because it really captured me! ahhhh sadistically Vincent-sama ! * Q *!

ahhh...i love psycho smut... *sighs* bout time someone wrote a story like this, especially after recent chapters, he's obviously starting to feel things he doesn't want to...

I really like how you used the religious theme (im catholic and we can be all like super strict sometimes) and I was cool with it cuz its art man chiiiilllll ok im gonna stop sounding like a hippie - really liked the imagery especially the ending when things kinda switched to her side

Wow... Wow! This is... I don't even have words for it, but definitely continue writing for this pairing - It just seemed so right how you them together - Vincent in love and Ada loving him back. Looking forward to more stories like this from you!

Hell yes.

That was perfectly brilliant.

Gorgeous. The language was beautiful. Fantastic.

But a few things (no, not all bad; most good):

1. Here's the bad thing: never apologize. Ever. Religious themes? Do we not see them in our English classes, in our books, in our politics? Of course we do. That's nothing to be apologetic for. Besides, when it's your work of art, it's your work of art. If it's good-as yours most certainly is-then there's no reason to apologize, even if the naysayers want you to. Besides, it's no use caring about what the anonymous reviewers on this site say anyway; half of them are jealous trolls who want nothing more than to bring you down.

2. I adored your Gone With The Wind reference.

3. Did I mention that I loved the language? Because it's gorgeous. And the intertwining of the story with the relationship was brilliant.

I'd say more, but I think I'd be rambling, so I'll just say "Bravo!" and hope that you continue to write more like this.

O.O

I don't have much to say...

This is just so breath-takingly beautiful...

Stunning...

/awestruck

Please write more!

~fuu