just think this is a beautiful story!

Great story. Not many Danny/Kono fics out there. This was well written and I love the plot! Don't worry about the Kono/Kona thing. I made the same mistake. Can't wait to read more!

I'm not a fan of the Danny/Kono pairing.

That being said...

Damn.

What a fine story.

I could hear their voices clearly.

Great story! I'm a sucker for Danny and Kono and you did a great job! Thanks for sharing!

Aw, lovely job. Now fingers crossed these two eventually get together on the show for reals. :D

~Red

The banter between the guys in this chapter was great - nice job!

~Red

Aw! It was so happy and cheerful, and then it got all dark and twisty. Poor Danny! Hopefully then team - Kono :D - can help him through this...

~Red

"Danny held his breath for a moment. "I know a guy like that, but I don't think he's any kind of a catch. He's actually kind of a mess."

"Really?"

"I don't know if you've noticed this, but he's..uh, short and he's…argumentative. He's a stubborn S.O.B. He hasn't been clean-shaven since the day of his wedding, and he isn't worth the price of a penny in a situation that requires swimming. And then there's the fact that he's a Haole. Plus, he's hurt people he's loved in the past.""

AW! I adored the bit above. SO Danny-ish. :D

Cute chapter. Can't wait to see them get rescued!

~Red

So intense! I love it. Well done! Great writing!

~Red

HOLY ACTION PACKED MUCH? Wow! I'm kind of blown away by the intensity of this first chapter. EXCELLENT job! :D

Also, your A/n: "The show's good, not great, but Scotty Caan has captured my imagination, and admittedly, AO'L and DDK aren't hard on the eyes either." THIS, so much. I don't love it, but I just adore Scott Caan's character.

And: "I have it in my head that Danny and Kona are going to have a thing for each other." I've been shipping them since like the second episode, lol.

Anyways, VERY well done, it already feels quite in character, and I am hastily reading on to find out what happens next. :D

~Red

I just discovered your this story today, and I've read it from start to finish! I was absolutely addicted!

Normally I'm a Steve/Kono fan but now I'm completely split! I just loved how your wrote them together!

The way you wrote them both was awesome, you captured all four of them perfectly I thought! Your dialogue was just great and the way you described them being lost in the ocean and then Danny's breakdown afterwards was just capitvating. It was like I was right there watching it all unfold.

Awesome job!

:)

Nicely written. I enjoyed it even though I am a big fan of the Steve whump. Hope to hear from you soon.

Wonderful story! I really enjoyed the chemistry between Kono and Danny. Your dialogue was great!

This story was great. The relationship with Danny and Kono was very sweet, and I thought the way you wrote their post-traumatic stress after their fight for survival was very well done. Happy Holidays!

"Then you'll do what I tell you. You're a colossal mess right now, and I'm going to get you well again. Now, I'm going to let you clean up in private, but here are the rules. You do not come out of the bathroom until you smell nice. I mean, really nice. Plus, you scrape that nasty rug off your face. Failure to comply means I trot you back in here, and clean you up myself."

This is my favorite line. Thank you so much. Steve is so caring and Chin just wants to help. They take over, it's great.