This fic is so wonderful, oh my goodness.

Can't wait to read more of your work!

I'm glad they ended up together! Great story :)

Awww, I like how Hibari is really starting to like him. Plus I love that getting hit with the 10 year bazooka ended up being the thing that did cause them to get together even though it was what Hibari wanted to stop haha.

I loved Hibari's dream! Very nice. Poor Dino ;_;

I like that Hibari is starting to like Dino more :)

I loved Hibird's appearance! Also poor Dino ;_; Glad that Hibari will start to fall for him 3

If Hibari is 18, then he's not really a minor is he? Anyway, I loved the scene with Enzo haha, adorable! Plus I loved that last part 3

I'm worried for Dino ;_;

Also, just going to point out that you said in chapter 1, "Many questions flooded the seventeen year olds mind," then you say 2 years later and Hibari is 18. Great story though :3

An interesting start! I can't wait to see how it goes :3

I love it totally!

hmm, I have a mixed feeling... At first, I was in love with your idea and your fic! But in the middle I was disappointed when Hibari suddenly decided to play with Dino...and decided to become his lover...And he thought it was a great decision to his problem, eh? He was so afraid of ending up with Dino...It was sudden and strange for me.

Also you have a lot of mistakes, but...your last smut scene was really good, I enjoyed it, thank you!)

OMG, you have such a brilliant idea! It's simple, yet fascinating. I just found your fic recently, but, I still fell in love. Although Hibari is kind of... OOC. :D But as long as he didn't turn out to be a sissy, who cares? XD I did see some typos in the last chapter, but nah, that's fine.

Your action part wasn't that bad, really. And I love to see how Hibari brought all the matters to his head... lol he is somewhat innocent or maybe just afraid to admit that he has fallen since the first time? Psst, lemme tell you... I like the cough-lemon-cough (blush)

Well, I'm suck in English, so I'm sorry if I'm confusing you with my review.

Keep up the good work!

~niedlichta

You finished, you finished, you finished! You finished it! Finally! :D I would have bugged you on MSN more for updates, but I only just got round to reading from chapters six to eight. I don't quite see where Kyouya found out he was "in love" with Dino, since it seems their relationship/attraction is, and was, purely sexual. The only feelings conveyed were Dino being head over heels and Kyouya acting as though it would hurt his pride as to so much as masturbate! The lemon... it's good, but there were some parts that made me cringe. "Manhood", "virgin hole", and other phrases/words really make me laugh and not take it seriously. Probably because a girl made me beta a story where there were "slick virgin hole"s and "vibrating tongue ring blowjobs". Never again, never again.

Much love!

alaklzldn it was so cute ;w;

You should write more D18 fics!

I'm so glad Kyouya finally accepts his relationship with Dino *-*

aww.

i always find it adorable when Hibari gets all nervously girly.

XD