Great story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next!

ooooo plz make more... my ideas r that something REALLY REALLY bad happens to roxy... like? Uh some one trys to kill him... OMG GOT AN IDEA! How bout another angel comes in wanting to be roxas mate? . I'd luv to see that happen

I think roxas should see a doctor if butterflies r in his tummy! :( lol

sexy... :P

This story is amazing! I'm sorry about what has happened to you but I'm glad that you had enough inspiration to write this lovely story. Keep up the good work!

~Ris

Sorry for your loss

Your story is you for posting!

I love how Roxas and Axel are so connected in this chapter.

I love how Axel is so passionate about Roxas, how he doesn't want to make Roxas feel bad. It's just so loving!

Another Great Chapter!

~Jenx

yay an update im in love with this and its only chapter 2 hee hee as always cant wait for more

love

-niculascrimsoninsanity

After reading your note at the end, I congratulate you on writing this amazing first chapter (I hope).

It must have been awful for you, albeit, I've never been in that situation.

But well done you, I hope you are proud of yourself, because that was a great achievement.

~Megz xoxo

Zaira,dear,I love you. Just remeber that,and I love tbe way this is written :D

im so sorry for your lose and i love how u started this story and i cant wait fir more

-love

crimsoninsanity

Wow... This is amazing! I would love to read more!