"How could he really want to marry her when he didn't want her support, didn't want her, during one of the hardest points of his life?"

That's the perfect line. He thought he wanted...

Great story dear!

xxoo Mari

Good job with this.

This is excellent! The progression through the relationship was very well thought out and well written. I liked that you wrote it from Kim's point of view. :)

Nicely done. Don and Kim aren't written too often. This was really great. Thank you.