This was *such* a good tale, I hope you haven't given up on it entirely. Even though its been a while there are those still waiting for an ending. Perhaps this Covid19 thing will work out in such a way it gives you time to finish it?

Well one can wish. Even so, I'm sending this in t the Butler's Bookshelf which is a list of Kuroshitsuji tales which are *well-written*-that's the only criteria. Doesn't say they have to be finished. And this definitely is well-written.

seriously...
Ciel's thoughts about sebastian as his friend,his tutor,his brother, but mostly as a father (figure) to him in chapter 4 had me bombarded by an overwhelming emotion (and confusion) XD

but don't get me wrong,I myself will also see sebastian as a father if I'm was being ciel back then; seeing him being so strict asf in parental kind of way for years but then again,those feelings will become a romantically interest ... duh XD

and not to mention idek I should saw sebastian as a father figure/brother/tutor or him as a... lover anymore cuz he acts in both ways

and damn u (and Charlotte) for torturing me with sebastian's absence for 1 and half of long ass chapters... his absence really getting on my nerves swear

anyway,i wonder if ciel was really ever intended to commit suicide by looking for the demon sword... and as much as I hate how depressing Ciel's thoughts was,
maybe some flashback would be great

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE

It really is a shame that this BEATUIFUL story hasn't been updated! I really did enjoy reading it however. Your take on Ciel is a much welcomed change, and this includes Sebastian as well. I think this is the first time I really enjoyed reading about OCs as well!

DON'T TELL ME YOU'VE FORGOTTEN ABOUT THIS BEAUTIFUL WONDEEFUL STORY! *crys like Lizzy* update soon

Update!

I just found this today and it is so wonderful and I love the concept you are writing ahhh I don't remember what chapter this was from but this was the best line ever "Except the flowers didn't smell like flowers. They smelled like dead people." ahahah thank you for your hard work so far to craft this yummy fic!

what happened? this was such a brilliant story.. :(

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS. Oh my God, this was awesome! I really like how you portrayed the characters, especially Ciel and Sebastian (also Undertaker in a Candy Store is so fun to imagine) and Lizzy's children are adorable :) And wow, I'd love it if it was indeed Alois and Claude watching them! :D
I guess you won't update this again, but I just wanted to tell you how very much I enjoyed reading. New favorite :)
I hope you have a nice day!

I have to say this has to be my favorite fic of demon ciel, it's just so cool.
I hope you update soon

Loving baby Ciel to death... He's soo cute.

I'm simply in love with your story and I hope you will come back to writing it, because I just can't help myself but wnat to know the continuation. Not only the story and characters, but also your language made me read it in one go and wish for more :D

I love this fic! Its original, interesting, funny (especially the part about Undertakers candy shop - Ive read it many times just to have a laugh and it seems to rival his "performance" in "Hamlet", LOL) and still manages to be deeeeeep. I love that the romance is not too rushed and that Ciel is not too much of a crybaby. I really hope you will continue writing this some day :)

out of the 30 or so fanfictions i have read of ciel and sebastian

I must say but this fanfiction hits the top part of the list so far, it is very interesting indeed, and also it doesnt seem to be to far fetched from the original story line, in which i like also, I am very interested with what will some next

and from what i assume of what direction you are taking this story i would very much like to see the end

please update soon!

eyes of sin

This is awesome!