Spectacular, just spectacular.

I can't tell you just with words how much I loved this. It was brilliant and cute and hot as hell. Thanks a lot for writting this.

wow
the retelling of the movie was just intense like
wow
loved how you wrote it
and Spocks "Fuck he's hot" at the hearing - the best thing ever even tho he didn't know it then haha

(Sigh) Oh my, it was written so beautifully.
First of all I want to commend you for the considerable division into paragraphs and largest smeared between them, which really lightest me to read so I finished in two days.

I was a bit apprehensive at first it was going to be another Pick writes the film. I was pleased to find out that it was concentrated and can place your interpretation.

It may have not suited the tone of the scene you were creating but seriously that was so them ;)

Loved it.

I love this story.

Wow! Such a beautiful, fabulous story. Love it.

hahahaha
So fun xD
I loved yout history!
It had the right amount of drama, angst, romance, humor and lemmon!
The perfect history for me ;P

Kiss

I coucld practically /hear/ the thoughts Jim was having after Spock's comment. XD Loved this. :)

this was freakin GREAT! it was really well written and thought and i love love love it :) thanks for such an awesome story. plus the drabble, it cracked me up ;)

Thanks for that !
Loved the punchline of the deleted scene

Hey!

Just came across your story today and couldn't stop reading. I loved the beginning where you filled the movie pictures with so many thoughts and emotions. It was so close to the movie but it was your interpretation and your turn of things and I think it's great. And I loved the developement of Jims and Spocks reationship afterwards, the misunderstandings and how you solved this. In the end it was very fluffy and cute. Thank you for this story - I can imagine it took you some time to write it but it was totally worth the time! Thx for sharing!

Greetings, xxx

Actually I just wanted to take a sneak peek into this story to see if it's worth to mark it for a later reading ... and now, 2 hours later, I find that I don't need to safe it for a later read as I've just finished it *lol*. Soooooo cute )

Thank you so much for writing this. You've made me love my beloved Kirk more ... Something I wouldn't have thought possible. This is my first Star Trek fanfic and I feel as if I may be spoiled for all others :) Loved it.