please finish the story please

I keep coming back to this story hoping it will be finished, sadly today is not the day. Maybe someday very soon? T_T

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Very disappointed that this is not complete. Please finish! I need to know what happens.

So, I know it has been years. Years. Years. Since you updated this story. I can only hope that one day soon you finish it. It's brilliantly crafted and balances humor, pain, and magic alongside the horrible nature of human and non-human creatures alike.

I am begging you to finish this because I need to know what happens.

With much hope and many well wishes,
Farisya

Dear Kagura,
It has been so long since we were left standing in Avalon with Jareth and Morgaine. Almost 4 years. Please give Jareth, Sarah, and the others a good finale. It's time.

Well...my pet
So like you, I am inclined to with hold my review until the end of my reading.
So much plot in the beginning...
So much intrigue in the end

Are you sacrificing plot for intrigue...
I think there are many of us FF fans who would crucify you for that, and.. you are too good.

We are waiting...

Nope, that's it. I'm gone. That was one of the nastiest, most gratuitous pieces of torture-porn I've ever read, and I read very little, because it's icky, and I didn't read much of this. You're quite disturbed, and I won't be reading any of your work ever again.

If Jareth and Sarah are siblings, I am so out of here.

Just found this terrific story. Nicely done! But what Jareth had never taken was a protégé (or protégée). Progeny means offspring (which is also true but not what you mean here). Principal Keats, not Principle. I love that Toby can recognize Jareth as a cat!

This Ares reads like the one from the Hercules series. Thank you for that.

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It's "Principal", not "principle." Though many principals have principles. And I have to say that you using real people kind of creeps me out...

Did you know that Helen Mirren actually played Titania in The Shakespeare Plays' version of "Midsummer Night's Dream"? With hot Peter McEnery as Oberon, and they are awesome! Mirren even shows some tit...

I don't know if this story has officially been abandoned, but I just wanted to let you know that I just read through the entire thing today and loved every minute of it. Despite a few typos here and there, your writing style is excellent. Thank you for a good Labyrinth read (you know, those are incredibly hard to find these days!).