Wow! What a great chapter! I like how you explained Han's need to win all the time!

WOW! I just love this fanfic. Not sure if you have thought about it but I would love to see a follow up story to this.

That was absolutely beautiful. Very impressed.

Really good. Very moving, and excellent characterization.

Wow! You have a gift for putting emotion into words. I never would have guessed you are so young. Keep writing! You have a gift that is rare. Take all the opportunities you can to write...one day you will have a best seller or write something that can change lives. Great job!

What an incredible story! I found myself getting quite emotional during this story, and you kept the characters very true. you are an amazing author, keep up the great work, and i look forward to more stories from you.

Only sixteen ! Very good story and you show their emotional view so well. Please continue to write. You are very talented.

it's stories like this that leave me in such awe that I'm embarrassed to post my own meager work. this is fabulous. you really have the characters nailed.

I enjoyed your writing and hope you will continue. Great Job!

Very, very impressive for your age. Please believe that isn't meant to be condescending, so I hope it doesn't come across that way.

My only nitpick is purely logistical, from an astronomy standpoint. It might actually make the scene even more poignant. Due to the speed of light, Leia would still being seeing Alderaan itself, and not the remnants. Fr'ex, we currently see stars that went supernova millions of years ago.

Keep writing!

You're only sixteen? Holy cow that was amazing. I love how you did this and I'm looking forward to more. Well done.

More H/L soon please!