i guess 1 good turn deserves another lol

yummmy maura in thigh high boots (almost) lol

Nice

hmmmm very good... can u do one more... where maura gets jane... that'd be so good

wow lol really hot story i loved it

I would love to see a sequel to this... *smirks*

It was very hot and very well written! A definite cold shower is needed after this. ;)

Smutarific! God, I love reading a story with Jane and Maura gettin' busy! Keep it up!

This was really good. The first chapter was short so I didn't know what to expect, but this was really hot. I really hope you are going to write Maura's turn to make Jane happy ;)

*Off to take a cold shower*

ok wow that was sexy and amazing and wow definitely good!

wow you are a really good writer. update soon

Be gentle? There's no need to gentle because it's perfect. God I do love women in boots!

I love it! Maura bought sexy boots for Jane! ;)

*jaw hits floor* YES! continue plz that was INCREDIBLY sexy!

Continue? Umm...abso-freakin-lutely! :)

hmmm...mixed feelings. written well. dont really get what the boots had to do with anything. I mean, get what shoes can mean but there was no indication of Jane actually being turned on by them. well there was but a little more explanation would have been nice. also, try not to put their words on the same line. its confusing.

but i do like it ) just some helpful criticism.