| Reviews for Goblin Child |
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   bgreenfl chapter 20 . 8/24 I cannot recommend this story! It started out with an interesting premise, but the last SEVERAL chapters degenerated into just a repetitive litany of names, titles, and ceremonial blather! To top it off, the "ending" was just a cliff-hanger for the supposed sequel. I was hooked by the beginning, but basically just skimmed the last half. Don't waste your time! |
| bgreenfl chapter 14 . 8/24 I have to say, I skimmed over all the detail on the coronation, and I never read all the detail on names, families, heirs, etc. For me, all the detail detracts from the flow. I am enjoying the basic premise of your story, but pretty much the only thing left is for Harry to become "the king of the world!" |
| lazygamer0001 chapter 10 . 4/14 Great story thus far... Harry will unite the muggle and magical world by becoming The King of the UK. |
| Lady Annabelle Slytherin chapter 14 . 2/27 I just laughed at the image of all the lords and ladies being blown over. |
| Stepheney chapter 16 . 1/9 Shouldn't Daphne be listed as Lady of the House for both Potter and Dumbledore since they are married |
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/1 Stupid draco is my friend homo crap. Up to here only malle interacción, harry multy gay stupidity. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/1 What the crap is this, AN are bigger than the chapters |
| BaddieDZ2 chapter 20 . 12/6/2019 Stupid mother fucker. You abandon this one with no warning, and then can't even be arsed to complete the rewrite. Hope you never write again. |
| FirePhoenixofHogwarts chapter 10 . 11/14/2019 Geewhizafry! Bring it down a few |
| FirePhoenixofHogwarts chapter 7 . 11/14/2019 12 aurors can't do 30 stunners at once. 12 stunners at one time yes 30 stunners would take almost all of them 3 times to cast. Do the math. 12 x2 is 24 then 6 more stunners to get to 30 |
| FirePhoenixofHogwarts chapter 5 . 11/13/2019 You do know that is not true Goblin Language. That is just your version of Goblin. |
| FirePhoenixofHogwarts chapter 3 . 11/13/2019 Yeah what he said. |
| FirePhoenixofHogwarts chapter 2 . 11/13/2019 Albus is a moron. |
| FirePhoenixofHogwarts chapter 1 . 11/13/2019 Cloak and Dagger . |
| Claud chapter 6 . 9/26/2019 Why all the unnecessary stuff? Please remove it as it detracts from your great story. |
