I kinda hate this..

that was good keep the chapters coming

Omg I love this chapter please update

Wow, what a way to meet. I can't wait to find out how you reconcile them!

interesting interpretation of the challenge. an interesting twist. enjoyed reading what you've written so far. hope you update again soon.

I LOVE IT! Real grit in this story but not overly strong grit. Can't wait for the update.

Good chapter, I don't see it bad at all.

Hmm, so sad to see such impatiemce in peopple. Of course, that's probably just me. I LIKE dragging things out in order to maximize the impact at the end. I find Naruto's reaction interesting. ALthough I can't decide if I think his acceptance is a little rushed, or just accpeting it as author license and move on.

great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

wow, this is a nice load of crap you have here. he cant even kill a konoha genin he doesn't know and keeps fucking going into a dream-scape with her? thought this was rated M story? change the description. this is almost a fluffy 'i found my brother!' fest. hears hoping your computer crashes.

Dude... This chapter sucks... Naruto was just killing thugs for the fun of it and in a five minutes he believes that he has a sister without ANY proof beside the words of a FOX, and became protective of her... That's just looks bad... It looks like he has two personality or something...

wave saga! wave saga! wave saga! wave saga!

I think it'll be more interesting to wait until the chunin exams. Heehee, can't wait to see the villagers faces if/when Naruto shows up unmasked.

i say the Chunnin exams, but he should be present in the wave saga. I think that would be interesting

Wave ark