Wow, I know this is an older story, but it really resonated with me. Very well-reasoned arguments! This is how the scene should have gone.

I vote that you should expand this scene into a larger fic. A reveal in this episode, would, after all, change how Morgana does things later on in the season.

Well written, and I likes.

I love it! In the actual series I can't wait for Morgana to find out about Merlin's magic so this will keep me entertained until such a time happens. You've grasped the character's interactions brilliantly. What else can I say? Just perfect!

That was brilliant! The dialogue, the description! Well done!

Pick it up for her? Stab her with it, Merlin. Grr, she makes me sooo mad. And she was such a cool good guy. However this is a perfect example of why you shouldnt mess around with another man's wife- your daughter may decide she hates you for it and attempt to kill you.

I didnt like that she got mad at Merlin for 'sacrificing her for himself'... i didnt see that at all. I mean, he didnt make her turn evil. He tried to help her.

Anyway, nice little story.

Great story. So sad. It give me deeper understanding of what Morgana had feel. At first I can't believe she is willing to kill Arthur but now i see her reason. She was jealous of Arthur who is recognise as uther child

Good scene, it made me sad.

I hate the way they made Morgana turn evil without much of a transition in between...I thought that she would at least feel a little emotion or remorse for betraying her friends-her BROTHER!-that have always been good to her, but no. She no longer cares about anyone but herself and it irritates the crap outta me.

Anyway, I loved it! :D

Sweet one-shot.