Wow. So creepy and disturbing. I love it. It reminds me of another Dexter fan fiction, "Missed Connections." That one's also about Brian's early beginnings and from his perspective. I wrote a short fan fiction, "Dexter Moiser meets Debra Morgan." The title pretty much tells you what it's about. I'd love for you to read. I think it's up your alley.

I like the scene where Dexter was taken and Brian was not. Nice touch.

this story is great. i like it. :D