Oh my goodness, this is just so funny. I literally laughed until I cried. Your characterization is so good, too! Everyone was just perfect, haha.

I really found this story hilarious. I loved the interactions between the characters. I look forward to your writing more stories about all of them. I especially liked this one because all of them are in it. But my favorite characters are Yagi, Aniya, and Shinjo.

Good work. Thanks for sharing...