Reviews for when a heart breaks, no, it don't breakeven
Bubbles of Colours chapter 1 . 5/15/2015
No, you're not right! It's TeddyandLily, they belong together forever *O*
Drkness'sDaughter chapter 1 . 10/28/2011
oh my gawd this made me so frickin sad( ive never like victoire much but this totally made me melt for her) awesome as always)
This is waltzingvelocity chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
I'm sorry! I just found this. And I'm glad I eventually did, because it's absolutely gorgeous! I love the style you wrote it in and gah, it's wonderful. Thank-you very much x
coeurfeyrac chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
EEHEEEHEE.

That was fucking amazing. You completely got into Vic's character, and it was poetic and flowed and it was wonderfully written and it made me /like Victoire/, which is just WEIRD for me.

I think you siriusly need to give me your talent. Please?

I want to marry it.

It's just... it was so /LilyTeddy/, and you wanted Lily and Teddy to be together, while sympathising with Vic and wanting her to be happy. It kind of made me want to ship VicNev- not sure why, it just seemed that way to me. Huh.

FANTASTIC, KAY?
breeutiful chapter 1 . 11/2/2010
This is absolutely gorgeous. :)

I love how you kept in character of Victoire the entire way through because it makes us feel sorry for her, but kind of think she deserves it - even if it seems like she is truly, sincerely sorry for doing what she has done.

The end bit just about killed me because I kind of loved her uncertainty at the end. I really felt like you gave her a realistic, believable voice and that's what makes this fic shine. :D
with the monsters chapter 1 . 10/25/2010
I love this! Thank you so much (:

I love that you've done it from Victoire's point of view because you somehow make it so that I still hate her, even though she's kind of pitiful, and I don't know how you do that but you do and you're wonderful!

Your writing is so pretty and it flows so nicely and I really liked your use of parantheses to show how Victoire really thinks. This was seriously good :)
niranj chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
SORRY VICTOIRE.

YOU'RE WRONG.

STUPID GIRL.

CHEATER.

LIAR.

SHE DESERVED IT.

SHE DESERVES HIM.

AND...

YOU DON'T.

NEVER DID.

NEVER WILL.

SORRY, VICTOIRE.

BUT YOU'RE WRONG.

:D
squeakyswings chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Thank you so much!

I love this - I really like how you write Victoire, and you've made the Teddy/Lily story so powerful from her point of view. I'm impressed with how you're able to write such a strong plot, with so much background, in such a (beautifully) short one-shot. It feels so complete. :)

I also love the form of this, how you've written it according to what Victoire hates about Lily and Teddy and /why/ she hates them.

Thank you, again!

Also, I lovelovelove the title. :D
roohali chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
that was one of your best lillytedddy drabbles. wht will happen after teddy and vic get married?
Amy chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Hey, it's me, Amy is rockin. Too tired to log in right now, and I figured I could actually give a review with constructive criticism and much raving when I'm actually awake... ;)

Anyway, I really really liked it, and thanks so much for dedicating it to me! You make me feel all happy inside, hehe.

Teddy/Lily is honestly amazing, and it's that much more powerful 'cause it's from Victoire's POV.

;)

Thanks!
lonely hands chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Urgh, I just had a nice long review typed up and I lost internet connection :( Oh well, here goes...

Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU. Oh, Jenny, you just made my day, dear. I'm at work on my break, typing this on my phone which I hate, but this, THIS, is worth it!

I just love how it's from Vic's POV, as I hate her, but I love her in a twisted kind of way, and you've get her as her normal (well, in my head, anyway) bitchy self but I feel for her as well, I mean, how does that work?

This is just so real and so true and just kind of raw, I guess. It's just love :3 Thank you soso much xx
merdarkandtwisty chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
this is good if you like teddy lily you should read some of my story expecially teddy's lily and a broken little girl