| Reviews for when a heart breaks, no, it don't breakeven |
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Bubbles of Colours chapter 1 . 5/15/2015 No, you're not right! It's TeddyandLily, they belong together forever *O* |
Drkness'sDaughter chapter 1 . 10/28/2011 oh my gawd this made me so frickin sad( ive never like victoire much but this totally made me melt for her) awesome as always) |
This is waltzingvelocity chapter 1 . 6/14/2011 I'm sorry! I just found this. And I'm glad I eventually did, because it's absolutely gorgeous! I love the style you wrote it in and gah, it's wonderful. Thank-you very much x |
coeurfeyrac chapter 1 . 11/27/2010 EEHEEEHEE. That was fucking amazing. You completely got into Vic's character, and it was poetic and flowed and it was wonderfully written and it made me /like Victoire/, which is just WEIRD for me. I think you siriusly need to give me your talent. Please? I want to marry it. It's just... it was so /LilyTeddy/, and you wanted Lily and Teddy to be together, while sympathising with Vic and wanting her to be happy. It kind of made me want to ship VicNev- not sure why, it just seemed that way to me. Huh. FANTASTIC, KAY? |
breeutiful chapter 1 . 11/2/2010 This is absolutely gorgeous. :) I love how you kept in character of Victoire the entire way through because it makes us feel sorry for her, but kind of think she deserves it - even if it seems like she is truly, sincerely sorry for doing what she has done. The end bit just about killed me because I kind of loved her uncertainty at the end. I really felt like you gave her a realistic, believable voice and that's what makes this fic shine. :D |
with the monsters chapter 1 . 10/25/2010 I love this! Thank you so much (: I love that you've done it from Victoire's point of view because you somehow make it so that I still hate her, even though she's kind of pitiful, and I don't know how you do that but you do and you're wonderful! Your writing is so pretty and it flows so nicely and I really liked your use of parantheses to show how Victoire really thinks. This was seriously good :) |
niranj chapter 1 . 10/24/2010 SORRY VICTOIRE. YOU'RE WRONG. STUPID GIRL. CHEATER. LIAR. SHE DESERVED IT. SHE DESERVES HIM. AND... YOU DON'T. NEVER DID. NEVER WILL. SORRY, VICTOIRE. BUT YOU'RE WRONG. :D |
squeakyswings chapter 1 . 10/24/2010 Thank you so much! I love this - I really like how you write Victoire, and you've made the Teddy/Lily story so powerful from her point of view. I'm impressed with how you're able to write such a strong plot, with so much background, in such a (beautifully) short one-shot. It feels so complete. :) I also love the form of this, how you've written it according to what Victoire hates about Lily and Teddy and /why/ she hates them. Thank you, again! Also, I lovelovelove the title. :D |
roohali chapter 1 . 10/24/2010 that was one of your best lillytedddy drabbles. wht will happen after teddy and vic get married? |
Amy chapter 1 . 10/24/2010 Hey, it's me, Amy is rockin. Too tired to log in right now, and I figured I could actually give a review with constructive criticism and much raving when I'm actually awake... ;) Anyway, I really really liked it, and thanks so much for dedicating it to me! You make me feel all happy inside, hehe. Teddy/Lily is honestly amazing, and it's that much more powerful 'cause it's from Victoire's POV. ;) Thanks! |
lonely hands chapter 1 . 10/24/2010 Urgh, I just had a nice long review typed up and I lost internet connection :( Oh well, here goes... Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU. Oh, Jenny, you just made my day, dear. I'm at work on my break, typing this on my phone which I hate, but this, THIS, is worth it! I just love how it's from Vic's POV, as I hate her, but I love her in a twisted kind of way, and you've get her as her normal (well, in my head, anyway) bitchy self but I feel for her as well, I mean, how does that work? This is just so real and so true and just kind of raw, I guess. It's just love :3 Thank you soso much xx |
merdarkandtwisty chapter 1 . 10/23/2010 this is good if you like teddy lily you should read some of my story expecially teddy's lily and a broken little girl |