Good ideas in there - I think. But it's kind of poorly written - bad spelling and grammar. But also things are a bit vague. Please work on this, as it's a promising fic idea.

I like it )

The story's awesome and the re-writing of the end of this episode is good, there wasn't enough... drama in the real one (if you know what i mean) You have a good descriptive talent however your grammar is sketchy in places. In this chapter you are writing in 3rd person, so when Arthur is thinking about Merlin then there should be a 'he thought' in there.

Also, I noticed that you used 'their' in "No! Their innocent!" when it should be "No! They're innocent!". There, their and they're are annoying aren't they? Sorry to sound patronising if you already know what each means but: There is used for places (you probably already knew that). Their implies ownership (It's their book) and They're is used in place of They are.

All the same, you have perfect mastery of the plot and though the grammar is off at times I'm really just trying to find something for you to improve on! The fact that I've resorted to commenting of your grammar means that there's not much else to complain about!

Please continue with this, I shall read with fascination )

Kikwoka x

Sweet chapter!

O, is this the part where his pants fell down? I loved that part, where Merlin pushed Arthur out into the hall. I think that was a throwback to the ep where Art does the same to Merlin. ( I think the one where Lance comes back, could be wrong.)

Nice story, no I dont think whats-his-name is opposed to torturing a woman. Stupid King. :P

Another great one!

Don't think people are losing interest - just that it can be tedious to review all the time.

Like the chapter and - yay! - not Morgana!

Btw I feel the same about Merlin/OC fics... It's weird.

wow! i just found this fic and i absolutely love it! xP i can't wait for the next update and i really like how you're... writing(?) the characters (did you get what i mean) - you nailed their personalities [because sometimes in fics they just seem different and it confuses me ):] but anyway keep up the awesome work! :3

Wow! What a strange twist! Update soon!

0oh great chapter.

How are you getting less reviews, I really like this! I like the way you have introduced a new character, especially one this mysterious, but i'm equally glad that you haven't made it love at first sight, i agree with you there, that is annoying.

Another really great chapter, love the way he kept repeating Arthur's name in a way to make the memories come back and his reaction to them, that made me smile! Great job and can't wait for more!

I really like this story. I love that you have had some Merlin whump in here! It's soooo refreshing!

Keep Updating

Nah, its fine, I have no idea why ppl stop reviewing. Maybeits not angsty enough for them.

Nice chapter. I'll be looking forward to the next one.

Another great chapter! you have to update soon! I'll review all future chapters and thfats a promise so please update!

This is still interesting, but I'm a bit confused.

Maybe things will become clearer in the next chapter. :) Update soon. ;o)

~Emachinescat ..

It's very good - can't wait for more! I'm glad there isn't going to be a romance between Medea and Merlin - i also dislike when that happens. Your story is amazing so far, it makes my day so much better :D