This was sooo good! I think you really thought this through. It sounds really believable. Could be canon in my opinion. And the ending! Sooo cute :3
I loved it so much _

You skipped the basics, didn't you?

...This is crazy, I've been on a reading marathon and now my face looks like Soul's shit-eating grin...but I totally dig it so, keep up the good work! I declare thee a genius

such a sweet end and such a grin nightmare for him
great writing

AWWWWWWW SO CUTE

Cute. And cuter! Darn it,you're really good. Am wondering right now how old you are...

You captured Soul wonderfully. Truly an amazing, IC fic.

Very, very nice. :) I loved this.

This is actually epic. Like super duper awesome epic. I love the style in which you wrote this, the memories fit in so nicely. I just adore Soul and your take on his past was refreshing and beautiful.

So pro.

I liked it very much! Soul's memories were all well placed.

I really like this oneshot, explains a lot about Soul in your point of view. I think you expressed his insecurities really well. Deep, kinda dark... Grim? Anyways, I love how Maka kinda serves as a light in his world, his only hope? I dunno... x3

Amazing, loved it :)

like the end! such an awesome story! i like how you wrote it, too, so creative!

Aww, that was wonderful! His memories, his thoughts and Maka! x33 The end was so sweet!

("was his little Maka doing something naughty? Like, looking up the male anatomy in a biology textbook or something...pfft..." xDD)

Maka rules!

This is so cute!

It's long, but that's one of it's posative points.

People should write more fanfics of SoMa just like this!

Yee-ha!